Another classic poem from Gore

[Wax Zombie]

Enjoy. :)

Cannibal Abuse

When I wake up this morning,
I couldn’t open my eyes.
My eyes were black and blue,
It acted like someone hit me.
I couldn’t feel anything,
I wouldn’t move everything.
I tried to open my eyes,
It feels like my eyes were dried up.
I end up hearing a stranger.
A stranger look up at me, when I couldn’t see anything.
I thought about the stranger end up carrying a knife.
He tied me up against the wall.
The stranger tried to open my eyes,
He took a knife and stick into my eyes.
Blood were coming out everywhere.
I scream to death
The stranger put my eye balls inside ice cream.
Then he eats it.
He cuts off all my body parts and ate it also.

[Cannibal]

At least you spelled a few words correctly.

:die:

[K.I.N.G]

:lol: That was hilarious! I love the ending.

[skybrick]

Another classic :ahheh:

[dead breed]

Attention seeker?

[desiredisaster]

this poem reminds me of the "berzerker" guy from clerks.

[Misfit]

Enjoy. :)

Cannibal Abuse

When I woke up this morning,
I couldn’t open my eyes.
My eyes were black and blue,
It felt like someone hit me.
I couldn’t feel anything,
I couldn't move everything.
I tried to open my eyes,
It feels like my eyes are dried up.
I end up hearing a stranger.
A stranger looked up at me, while I couldn’t see anything.
I thought about the stranger who ended up carrying a knife.
He tied me up against the wall.
The stranger tried to open my eyes,
He took his knife and stuck it into my eyes.
Blood was coming out everywhere.
I screamed to death
The stranger put my eye balls inside ice cream.
Then he ate it.
He then cuts off all of my body parts and then ate it also.

ok this is the best i could do to edit this...still some of it is incorrect

[H78]

Cannibal Abuse

When I woke up this morning,
I couldn’t open my eyes.
My eyes were black and blue,
It felt like someone hit me.
I couldn’t feel anything,
I couldn't move everything.
I tried to open my eyes;
It felt like my eyes were dried up.
Then I heard a stranger.
The stranger looked up at me, while I couldn’t see anything.
I thought about the stranger, who was carrying a knife.
He tied me up against the wall.
The stranger tried to open my eyes,
He took his knife and stuck it into my eyes.
Blood was coming out everywhere;
I screamed to death.
The stranger put my eye balls inside ice cream...and ate it.
Then he cut off all my body parts and ate them as well.

ok this is the best i could do to edit this...still some of it is incorrect

I took it a step further.

At least you're trying, Gore...At least you're trying.

[skybrick]

With all that spell check crap its no longer a classic poem.

[Misfit]

it now has the ability to be read

[Wax Zombie]

ok this is the best i could do to edit this...still some of it is incorrect

Thanks for fixing my poem. :coolbeer: It's better now.

[CrazySicilian]

The next Poe. :D

[pastor_ice43]

:oogle: my god

[K.I.N.G]

You probably shouldn't try rhyming eyes with eyes.

[Godfatha]

Still doing the writing thing I see... well i would stick with prose and leave poetry be.

[Misfit]

gotta give ya credit waxy for sticking with it even tho grammer is not your thing

[thrEE6MAfia]

do what you want, but don't do it around me.
Idleness and dissipation breed apathy.
I sit on my ass all goddamn day,
A misanthropic anthropoid with nothing to say
So do what you must and do all you can,
Break all the fucking rules and
Go to Hell with Superman and
Die like a champion, yeah hey!

I don't know if the billions will survive,
But I'll believe in God..I Will never believe God
My moniker is man and I'm rotten to the core.
I'll tear down this fuckin building
just to pass through the door.

if anyone knows what t hats from...you rock

[thrEE6MAfia]

looks like no one knows...

[CrazySicilian]

Do What You Want, Bad Religion...

[thrEE6MAfia]

:appl:
BRs version
http://youtube.com/watch?v=BDmvcqYE51Y

fat mike of Nofxs version
http://youtube.com/watch?v=8xhj4YBcZ8Q&feature=related

[skybrick]

:die:

[Oravear]

thanks gore

[koolmike]

Best thing since Keats.

[Misfit]

i wasnt impressed with keats