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H78
08-06-2008, 02:55 PM
Let's create a story.

Yes, this is one of those threads. Roll with it and stop your bitchin'.

***RULES***READ BEFORE POSTING***

Write one sentence. JUST ONE - no more than one! Hear that, that's ONE SENTENCE! If you want to write something other than a sentence contributing to the story, then just put your comment in a SPOILER TAG so it is not read as part of the story.

Try to make it grammatically correct so things don't get crazy. When things settle down, I'll copy and paste the story into a document and post it (and make any necessary edits).

Also, try to make some sense, please; don't follow something like "Then he had a bowl of ice cream," with "I love putting bananas up my ass." That said, something like "I love to place things in inappropriate places," could be followed with "I love putting bananas up my ass." Have fun with it, just don't be a douche. Lets try to get some sort of crazy story going.

***END OF RULES***

Title: "The Day UHM Stood Still"
By: UHM

I'll never forget the sinking, helpless feeling; the kind of feeling you get when you know bad news is coming.

Take it away, folks!

woodenheart
08-06-2008, 03:10 PM
I paced back and forth, my thoughts racing, how was I gonna tell her....

IKickAssForTheLord
08-06-2008, 03:28 PM
That I have a huge secret that will change everything.

H78
08-06-2008, 03:30 PM
But then, in the midst of my biggest fear, it dawned on me.

Leanne_777
08-06-2008, 03:42 PM
I forgot to get rid of it...

H78
08-06-2008, 03:47 PM
So I walked into the room and there it was, laying on the bed, waiting for me to dispose of it before she noticed.

satanocat
08-06-2008, 03:52 PM
i heard a creaking noise on the front stairs.

Doc Awesome
08-06-2008, 04:07 PM
My heart began to race faster and faster hoping it was just my imagination and not what I was fearing it to be.

Luris Blear
08-06-2008, 04:19 PM
The creaking noise grew ever louder into the sound of wet footsteps on rotted wood.

H78
08-06-2008, 04:43 PM
Out of a sudden rush of fear, I ran toward the sliding closet, locking myself in with spare nylons that had been draped over a coat hanger.

darkoverlord
08-06-2008, 04:43 PM
slowly it started creeping closer and closer to the door

H78
08-06-2008, 04:51 PM
"When the snow falls white," a soft voice whispered, "you must choose between fight and flight."

IKickAssForTheLord
08-06-2008, 05:43 PM
I scream out "FIIIIGGGGHHHHHTTTTT" with anger in my voice.

Highwayman
08-06-2008, 06:06 PM
With my heart pounding and hands shaking I do what needs to be done and kick open the door.

IKickAssForTheLord
08-06-2008, 06:12 PM
And There She Was Standing In Front Of Me Shaking In Fear!

woodenheart
08-06-2008, 06:21 PM
I just wanted to grab her and hold her and tell her it was gonna be alright

Doc Awesome
08-06-2008, 06:27 PM
But I couldn't because I knew it wouldn't be and now because of my madness I've brought my own daughter into this.

H78
08-06-2008, 06:35 PM
"Sweetheart," I asked, "what are you doing here and who told you to say that?"

Doc Awesome
08-06-2008, 06:46 PM
She looked at me with her pale blue eyes still showing a bit of fear and with absolute honesty with bit of confusion said, "I didn't say anything daddy."

Highwayman
08-06-2008, 06:55 PM
I knew this wasn't my daughter... it's not the same girl... there is something wrong here.

Terrorsick
08-06-2008, 07:30 PM
Something was lurking behind her eyes.Someone....


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satanocat
08-06-2008, 07:31 PM
i took a step back and thought to myself, "what if its me?"

Joker
08-06-2008, 07:37 PM
When all of a sudden a knock was heard at the front door,followed by a strange giggle.

IKickAssForTheLord
08-06-2008, 07:41 PM
I opened my door, to my amazement there was nothing but a tunnel.

KING
08-06-2008, 07:43 PM
I could see further down the tunnel that it split into three, there was a sign above each tunnel

Joker
08-06-2008, 09:16 PM
He could see a faint glow down one of the tunnel's,a gut wrenching smell came from the second tunnel and he could hear soft moaning coming from the third.

IKickAssForTheLord
08-06-2008, 09:52 PM
He suddenly made up his mind to see what was down the soft moaning tunnel.

Doc Awesome
08-06-2008, 09:58 PM
He grabbed his frightened daughter by the hand just before entering the tunnel and the daughter looked up at her father and says, "You chose to fight and fight you shall."

Revenant
08-06-2008, 10:05 PM
He couldn't make sense of her words, but he gave her a long stare, he could tell something was not right, her eyes were a lifeless shade of blue, her face lacking color, and her hand, normally giving off a sense of warmth, was cold and unwelcoming..still, he began creeping down the tunnel, vigilant of what lied ahead.

H78
08-06-2008, 10:22 PM
With his right hand weaved into his daughter's left, he steadily made his way down the tunnel until he noticed crunching beneath his feet and a cool sensation atop his head; it had begun to snow.

KING
08-06-2008, 10:34 PM
I raised my head, opened my mouth to taste the snow flakes, as one steadily floated onto my tongue. I turn to my daughter to find she has vanished, a feeling of dread creeps over me.

Joker
08-06-2008, 10:41 PM
As he started to panic,the thought of what he left laying on the bed weighed heavy in the back of his mind,he needed to get rid of it,but it would have to wait for now....he needed to find his daughter.

skybrick
08-06-2008, 11:26 PM
Step by Step, each foot he took got him further in the dark snowy tunnel. The soft moaning was getting louder and it felt like he was walking to his doom.

H78
08-07-2008, 11:42 AM
"When the snow falls white, you must choose between what's wrong and right," moaned the voice from deep within the tunnel.

woodenheart
08-07-2008, 12:06 PM
He stopped walking and a cold, uncomfortable chill ran down his back.. he had heard that voice before.

Luris Blear
08-07-2008, 02:22 PM
The voice had only spoken to him once before, on the night his wife had walked though the same bedroom door he had never to be seen again.

H78
08-07-2008, 02:59 PM
But today, when his wife's skin-stripped corpse suddenly reappeared atop their down-covered bed, his realized his biggest fear; how would he finally tell his daughter that her mother was, as he had always suspected, dead?

H78
08-11-2008, 01:39 PM
Someone write the next line goddamnit

IM_UndeaD
08-11-2008, 03:11 PM
The Moaning Continues But This Time ITS RIGHT Behind Him?

woodenheart
08-11-2008, 03:33 PM
As he turns to look, he feels a cold, wet hand grab his arm.

KING
08-11-2008, 07:24 PM
Facing now the thing that had grabbed him, he stares into the cold blank eyes of his recently deceased wife. Images start racing through his mind of how it happened, how he had killed her..

woodenheart
08-12-2008, 08:58 AM
He had loved her but knew it had to be done to rid his family of the horrific evil that consumed her.

Joker
08-12-2008, 10:55 AM
Where is my.........our daughter he cried,as tears ran down his cheeks.

woodenheart
08-12-2008, 11:55 AM
He watched in horror as the rotting corpse of his once beautiful wife crawled toward the bedroom door....

woodenheart
08-12-2008, 12:14 PM
He had to stop the madness from reaching the one thing he had left in his life...his daughter.

woodenheart
08-12-2008, 12:29 PM
The shot echoed through the room and his pain was unbearable..there stood his daughter in the doorway.

Joker
08-12-2008, 12:56 PM
But,the gun had no effect on his wife's rotting,animated walking corpse,she...it only looked to be stunned for the moment.

woodenheart
08-12-2008, 02:56 PM
He dropped to his knees, gun still in hand, pulls the lifeless body toward him and lets out a blood curdling scream......

KING
08-12-2008, 06:36 PM
The End? :shrugs:

skybrick
08-12-2008, 07:36 PM
Now lets all pitch in some money and makes this become a short movie.

Joker
08-12-2008, 08:07 PM
Hmmmm,so many qustions left unanswered.:D

IKickAssForTheLord
08-12-2008, 08:23 PM
A Lot!

woodenheart
08-12-2008, 08:35 PM
it is not over...i never end things...I keep on going and going and going...

Wrathborne
08-12-2008, 09:48 PM
Takes out Woodenhearts Duracells:D