Fanfic: My dark Heart

[Wax Zombie]

I just wrote this very short dark depression poem a few days ago.

My Dark Heart

As the cold stone drives down into my heart,
I feel the blackness tearing me apart.
As my tears goes down to my face,
My heart dies down to all human race.
I thought I will love forever,
Now it will never be the same.
As my dark heart closest me,
I will lay in the dust for all eternity.

[woodenheart]

:thumbup3:.....nice.

[koolmike]

I just wrote this very short dark depression poem a few days ago.

My Dark Heart

As the cold stone drives down into my heart,
I feel the blackness tearing me apart.
As my tears goes down to my face,
My heart dies down to all human race.
I thought I will love forever,
Now it will never be the same.
As my dark heart closest me,
I will lay in the dust for all eternity.


OK. Not clear on some lines.

[Wax Zombie]

Yeah I know I suck at poems.

[koolmike]

Hey, you can't connect with everyone. Some people see everything a poet is saying and someone else doesn't. That's the beauty of poetry.