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02-08-2009, 02:37 PM
(c) 2008 TOBY JOHANSEN. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.

SCENE 1: BAD NIGHT FOR VANDLISM / OPENING

INT. GRIZZLER'S HOME / NIGHT

October 27, 1986

3 guys dressed as 80s-styled punks: Jeff, Barry, and Ryan are walking up toward Donald Grizzler's house and joking around about his legend, looking up at the house.

BARRY
So this is where that crazy clown killer hillbilly retard lives?

JEFF
Yep, the home of Donald Grizzler...

RYAN
Does his name live up to the expectations of his killings?

JEFF
I hate it when you use big words, Ryan. Who gives a fuck about his name? His killings are legend in this town! Gutted everyone he picked out one-by-one and took them into his house right over there and cut up their bodies and ate them...

RYAN
Yikes.

JEFF
Alright, boys, let's paint a bitchin' Mona Lisa!

(CUT TO) Jeff, Barry, and Ryan run around laughing hysterically and spray-painting all over the building. (CUT TO) Ryan then goes in starts spray painting inside of Grizzler's house, before he then walks over toward a dark corner, where he then meets Grizzler face-to-face before Grizzler decapitates him, but we don't see it. (CUT TO) Jeff and Barry keep fooling around and finish spray painting the sides of the home of Grizzler's. They both stand back to take a look at their work.

JEFF
Look at this! Look at this sweet pad, man. It's so fuckin' A!

Barry then starts to worry about Ryan not being with them.

BARRY
Where's Ryan?


(CONTINUED) .2

JEFF
Fatass must be in the house still, trying to scare us.

(CUT TO) Barry then spots something he's never seen before on the steps toward the home, and points it out for Jeff to see too, as they both look at the object sitting on the steps with fearful freak-out.

BARRY
Jeff, what's that?!

(CUT TO) We get a zoomed-up look at the stairs seeing that Ryan's head has been made into a jack-o-lantern. (CUT TO) Jeff and Barry start to freak out a bit.

BARRY
Holy sh--..oh man! You see what he did to Ryan?!?! Oh my god!! We shouldn't have came here, man!..I don't like this, Jeff, I don't like this at all!

JEFF
Shut up, Barry! Quit bitchin'! Now, if we're gonna get out of here alive, we need to make sure the killer who ever did this to Ryan doesn't find us first...We'll run to the police station...bring them down here and rip that psycho's balls off!

BARRY
I don't know, man, if Grizzler was a ghost or some shit, man, he can find us no matter where we hide! Like walk-through-walls and shit, man!...

JEFF
That whole Grizzler story's bullshit! Some copycat loser-freak is out here right now, but I know if my legs would be the first to go...that Grizzler DOESN'T exist!!

(CUT TO) Suddenly, Grizzler comes up behind Barry, forcing Jeff to jump out of the way and watches as Barry gets his head chopped in half and then gets stabbed in the chest a few times by Grizzler's ax. (CUT TO) Jeff runs away. (CUT TO) Grizzler then rips off Barry's chest skin and rips out his left lung and throws the body to the ground and looks up to Jeff and runs toward his direction. (CUT TO) Jeff keeps running and running to get away from Grizzler, and then stops when he feels he's safe. (CUT TO) Suddenly, Grizzler comes out from behind him somehow and chops both of his legs off instantly at once. (CUT TO) Jeff falls to the ground and Grizzler comes up, stabbing his belly in and rips out his intestines and eats some of them before taking his ax and ramming it full force into Jeff's head.

(CONTINUED) .3

ToBy JoHaNsEn's NIGHT OF THE GRIZZLER

SCENE 2: GETTING OFF THE BUS

INT. OUTSIDE / AFTERNOON

3 friends getting off the bus: Julie, Taylor, and Tyler, as they talk to each other about what their next homework assignment is, the Julie and Taylor talking about boys, and Tyler talks about what happened to his nerdy friend Vergel after he got beat up by the football players, the three of them walking up toward Julie's house.

TAYLOR
Mr. Slater wants our class to finish up that damn paper by tomorrow or he'll give us another lecture to get it right.

JULIE
That sucks, what's the paper on?

TAYLOR
Uh, just all this stuff about a Liopleurodon dinosaur...said he'll give me extra credit if I turn it all in before class starts...just to show I'm not lazy.

JULIE
Maybe he wants to ask you out.

TAYLOR
Sure, and Penises can sing AC/DC'S greatest hits!

JULIE
Speaking of "asking out", Mike was asking me out today to go see that scary "Slaughter High" movie tomorrow..

TAYLOR
Did you say yes?

JULIE
No, because we have to go Halloween shopping tomorrow with you guys, but I told him I had to take care of my grandmother for the week.

TAYLOR
Julie, you can't just tell one of the cutest guys in school "NO!" to a date! Everyone will think you're weird! Or a girl-lover!

JULIE
Is it wrong to love you? (Giggles)

(CONTINUED) .4

TAYLOR
That's not what a I meant, I was meaning of a homosexual.

JULIE
Taylor, if I was a homo you'd be the first lucky girl I'd fuck!

TAYLOR
Sure, Julie, sure. Or you'd play with Jessica Boone, that nerd girl trying to be like us "normal people"..

Julie and Taylor laugh together.

JULIE
But I told Mike I'll be more than happy to date him later next week, AFTER my visit with my grandmother.

TAYLOR
Uptight about Halloween, aren't you?

JULIE
Yeah, ever since I was little...

TYLER
My nerdy buddy Vergel was shooting some rocks at rats after those jockey bastards beat him up a couple of times behind the school yesterday...

EXT. JULIE'S HOUSE / AFTERNOON

(CUT TO) They go into Julia's house and start to talk about getting Halloween costumes, and going to the costume store tomorrow. Julie starts to talk about her busty sister in envy.

JULIE
Tyler, when are you going to stop being friends with that freak?

TYLER
Just as soon as I nail a date with your sister...

JULIE
Ugh, don't even get started with my sis...

TAYLOR
So which Halloween store are we going to tomorrow?

JULIE
Savini's Costumes and Novelty, probably the only one closest to us anyways, I heard they've got some new costumes and cool Halloween stuff on sale, hearing the place looks radical.

(CONTINUED) .5

TYLER
Will they have some more Hollywood blood effects to sell?

JULIE
Definitely!

TYLER
At least now I know it'll be worth every penny.

TAYLOR
What are you guys dressing up into?

JULIE
I'm not too sure yet, I'm sure I'll know when we look around.

TYLER
I'm dressing as the Devil's Bunny, tall, floppy-eared, blood splattered, y'know?

TAYLOR
Black Cat for me, love the old traditional looks to a Halloween holiday, some of the people at the houses we're trick-or-treating at will think I'm so cute they'll just throw their candy at me!

JULIE
Oldie-Moldy, I like it!

TAYLOR
Oldie-Moldy?

TYLER
That'll be cool. So, what is your sister dressing up as?

JULIE
What do you think? She's just going to be the same ol' cop girl looking for Halloween T'Pers...

TAYLOR
We going to look for pumpkins?

JULIE
Yeah, probably up at the grocery store, after we get the costumes we'll go buy our pumpkins.

TAYLOR
Nice! Getting costumes, buying and carving pumpkins into jack-o-lanterns...I feel like a kid again!

TYLER
Yeah, I wouldn't mind "carving" your sister's "pumpkins"...heheh!
(CONTINUED) .6

JULIE
Tyler, shut up about her...She wouldn't date you even if you had hotter wheels on your car.

TYLER
Heh, I could try to ask her out, I don't know why you're so upset when we talk about her...where is by the way?

JULIE
She's just still doing her job as always, stopping all the bad people...especially the ones that make fun of her thighs and ass...I'm sure every girl would want what she has...I envy that bitch and her tits...every guy I try to ask out always just wants to know about her...

SCENE 3: CARRIE THE COP

INT. ROADSIDE / AFTERNOON

3 Girls: Carrie(who is a very busty cop/Julie's sister) has Phylly and Mary-Anne pulled over off the road, as we get some cleavage of Carrie before getting to Phylly and Mary-Anne as they complain that they were only going to a BloodLuster concert and Carrie writing them a ticket for almost causing an accident.

PHYLLY
Look, we were just excited to be going to this BloodLuster concert...we barely hit any of the cars on our lane, just trying to get passed.

MARY-ANNE
(Sighs) We were careful, we didn't do anything wrong...

CARRIE
You nearly ran off about three cars on your lane and nearly drove in the wrong lane to pass a few JUST so you can have more road to get to some lower-grade concert...and you're telling me that's not wrong?

MARY-ANNE
Who are you calling lower-grade? This is BLOODLUSTER we're talking about!

PHYLLY
Yeah, where do you get off on calling the best band in the world "lower-grade"? You must be 12 or on something...

CARRIE
Nah, I'm sober, what about you? Are you sober?...

(CONTINUED) .7

PHYLLY
Unfortunately.

MARY-ANNE
We'll find some people who'll share some goods...we need to get all pumped for the boys to love-hump these "goods"!

Both Phylly and Mary-Anne playfully squeeze their breasts. (CUT TO) Carrie starts laying out a line where breasts were better than theres and we get a boob shot...yay!

CARRIE
Girls, if you call those goods...why don't you check out my "treasure chest"!

(CUT TO) Carrie undoes her top and lets her big beautiful boobs pop out at Phylly and Mary-Anne. (CUT TO) Phylly and Mary-Anne cross their arms and glare at Carrie. (CUT TO) Carrie puts her top back on and continues writing out the ticket.

CARRIE
Now, girls, keep your "pennies" in your "purses", and please keep your damn eyes on the road. If you two try anything on the road, your asses are sold for jail bait.

(CUT TO) Carrie lays the ticket on Phylly's lap, leaving away, swaying her ass along as she walks toward her car. (CUT TO) Phylly and Mary-Anne chuckle and make fun of Carrie.

MARY-ANNE
At least our asses are good for jail bait, I guess she's just jealous because hers is too bony for it...

(CUT TO) Carrie hears this, and takes out her club angrily-annoyed.

CARRIE
Hmph, let me give you a warning of what it feels like to get into trouble more than once, bitches.

(CUT TO) We see Carrie take her club and see it slam down on one of the girls' car's tail lights right before we see it break the light and cutting to the part where we see Grizzler chopping up some dead bodies into pieces.

SCENE 4: GRIZZLER FEEDING

INT. GRIZZLER'S HOME / NIGHT

Getting shots of Grizzler cutting up dead bodies into pieces and
(CONTINUED) .8

eating them. (CUT TO) We then see Grizzler take his mask and then his axe as he walks out to his doorway to look up at the moon. We then see him walking around in the woods toward town, hearing his demonic clown laughter, as if two-people-were-laughing-together-at-the-same-time type of sound.

SCENE 5: NIGHT TERRORS

INT. JULIE'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Inside Julie's house, Julie and Taylor are gossiping about a bitch cheerleader girl at school named Candy who is planning to have sex with a couple of guys, saying she'll probably have sex with her brother or father as one of them, as they wash dishes.

JULIE
You know Chelsea?

TAYLOR
The cheerleader?

JULIE
Yeah, I hate her, being miss bossy-ass and a gloryhole princess...

TAYLOR
I heard she was gonna have a hoedown with some guys back at the school, saying they're all gonna sneak into the school at night and get into the gym so they can have their own private par-tay, so-to-speak...

JULIE
(Chuckles sarcastically) What a bunch of bullshit, I wouldn't even let her suck me off, and even if that were true, I would miss it for the world to see all those boys find how much syphilis their penises harnessed.

TAYLOR
Shut up, Julie, you're grossing me out...

(CUT TO) Taylor and Julie finish the dishes, as Julie wipes off her hands she walks over to pour herself a cup of red fruit juice, while Taylor dries her hands off and looks at Julie crossing her arms, wondering where Tyler could be.

TAYLOR
Where the hell is Tyler? He's late bringing those snacks for our sleepover...


(CONTINUED) .9

JULIE
I think he's also looking for some candy for the trick-or-treaters.

TAYLOR
Sheesh, you'd think it would take him this long--..

Then Taylor is interrupted when the door bell rings. Julie goes to look outside, but there's no one outside.

JULIE
Hello? Hello? Anybody out here?

Silence, and nothing.

JULIE
There's no one out here...

Suddenly, Tyler comes out from behind Julie, wearing a skull mask and scares her, laughing at her. Taylor scolds Tyler for scaring Julie and then Tyler says he has to go get a few more of the groceries in his car.

TYLER
HAHAHAHAA!!! I didn't scare you, did I? HAHA!!

JULIE
Tyler you prick!

TAYOR
You're late, Tyler, have you gone to the store at all, and why would you scare Julie like that?!

TYLER
Take it easy! Jeez, shitz-flinch much! I was only having some fun..

TAYLOR
Whatever.

JULIE
Where is the snacks and stuff I gave you money for, Tyler?

TYLER
Relax, it's in the car so I wouldn't drop it all over your pretty face.

Tyler turns to go to his car before his face bumps right into Carrie's big breasts jumping a bit in fright from her coming out of no where. She jokes around with Tyler, smothering his face
(CONTINUED) .10

into her tits before she sends him off to get the groceries.

TYLER
Ahhhhh!

CARRIE
Well, they there you little crypt keeper. Coming to steal some goodies from my coffin? Hehehe, alright, you nut case, go get your groceries.

Carrie walks over toward Julie, Julie a bit unpleased to see her. Julie lets her sister in the house, her sister telling her that she's going to bed and then they turn to Tyler to tell him to hurry up.

JULIE
You get fired already?

CARRIE
Nah, I just had to come home for my shift to be over.

JULIE
Oh.

CARRIE
Well I'm going in, rest these "pumpkins" of mine...

TAYLOR
Tyler! Hurry up!

We hear a loud noise, and Tyler yells in anger.

TYLER
Gah! Goddamn it, Taylor, I'm trying! Keep your mouth shut!

Taylor and Julie giggle.

SCENE 6: DEATH OF A WITCH

INT. SOME PLACE IN TOWN / NIGHT

1 old woman: Witch Woman is dressed up as a witch and is putting away a box of Halloween supplies in the back of her car, and after she does we hear Grizzler's echoing demonic clown laughter, which makes Witch Woman look around in fear from what she was hearing.

GRIZZLER
MUAHAHERHERHAAA!!!

(CONTINUED) .11

(CUT TO) She denies hearing the sound and goes to try and get into her car, but she realizes that she had locked it, so she takes out her keys. (CUT TO) Suddenly we hear Grizzler's demonic clown laughter again, this time it sounds like it's getting closer as the lady stops and looks around to see where it was coming from, there's nobody anywhere around her...no one on the streets...no Grizzler except his laugh.

GRIZZLER
MUAHAHERHERHAAA!!!

(CUT TO) The Witch Woman turns back to her van, fondling with the keys and she finds the right one and just when she was just about to enter the key into the slot, we hear Grizzler's demonic clown laughter again, but this time it's even more closer, and she drops her keys to see who is around.

GRIZZLER
MUAHAHERHERHAAA!!!

(CUT TO) Then all is silent. (CUT TO) Then the Witch Woman gets her keys and tries to open her car and when she does, we see Grizzler come out and get her from inside her car and the Witch Woman screams. (CUT TO) Grizzler first shoots his axe right through her stomach and rips out her guts onto the ground while pulling the axe out and he then slams the axe hard into her head and we see Grizzler pull her into the car as he takes back his axe and begins slaughtering her in the car as it moves around.

SCENE 7: THE NEXT DAY

INT. COSTUME SHOP / AFTERNOON

Julie, Tyler, and Taylor are shopping for makeup and costumes and makeup, Julie and Taylor talking about Julie's family.

TYLER
Girls, this stuff is awesome! With all this stuff we could make our own zombie movie like George Romero!

TAYLOR
I never got to ask, how's your mother doing?

JULIE
She's fine, Carrie always visits her around the weekends when she gets a break. At least she finally coped with my dad's death...

TAYLOR
Yeah, how are you and Carrie taking it, lately?

(CONTINUED) .12

JULIE
Taylor, it's fine, it's only been two years...but me and Carrie have took it fine...but we both still miss him...Carrie usually talks about the times we all went out together....now look at us, the only people together are me and Carrie, and mom's at her condo on the far side of this town...at lease Carrie gives her visits...and Grandma sent her regards...

TAYLOR
Why don't you go?

JULIE
I do, but school's always ready to kick my ass, y'know?

TAYLOR
Yeah..

(CUT TO) Tyler finds the right pink bunny outfit, examining it before quickly taking it.

TYLER
Sweet mother of all things damned! This is JUST the costume I need!!

(CUT TO) Julie admires an Alice costume from Alice in Wonderland, Taylor admires a cat suit to go with her cat mask. (CUT TO) As they shop, the teens talk about how the boys at school would think about them going out trick-or-treating at their age and wonder where they should go to trick-or-treat, Tyler suggests Akron Street.

TAYLOR
Hey, I found the best black cat costume to go with my cat mask I made!

JULIE
So what do you think the guys at school will think of us going trick-or-treating at our age?

TAYLOR
We should never let them know about us going out like this, it would make our popularity look bad to them, saying we just like doing little kid stuff...

JULIE
Yeah, you're probably right. Especially if Mike knew about it, he'd rat me out to everyone.

TAYLOR
What street are we going to go trick-or-treating at anyway?
(CONTINUED) .13

TYLER
I was thinking we'd go trick-or-treating over at that Akron Street up around the Weenhollow Lane area up the road from Julie's house.

TAYLOR
Yeah, I heard they have more houses up there anyway.

JULIE
More houses means more candy.

TYLER
Exactly! And after we trick-or-treat, we can go to Atkin's Alley and I can show you girls that ghost that usually pops up around the night time.

JULIE
Tyler are you sure that old ghost thing is even true? ... Tyler?

(CUT TO) Julie walks over to a mirror and checks herself out as she holds the costume up to her body to see. (CUT TO) Tyler scares Julie with the clown mask he found, popping out of no where, and Tyler then tosses the clown mask on the rack.

TYLER
Isn't this place cool?

JULIE
Tyler stop it, damn it!

TYLER
Why, Julie? Don't you like clowns?

JULIE
No, just get Taylor and let's pay for our stuff.

TYLER
Alright, alright, alright!

(CUT TO) Julie looks at the scary clown mask that makes her remember of her grandmother, seeing a flashback of her sitting in front of her grandmother as her grandmother tells her the story of Donald Grizzler. (CUT TO) When they go to the counter and talk about staying out all night for Halloween, the Creepy Clerk leaning over to warn them about Donald Grizzler, but Julie scolds the Creepy Clerk and they buy their stuff, and she'd tell Taylor and Tyler the story later.

TAYLOR
How long are we staying out?
(CONTINUED) .14

JULIE
Why, do you have a date?

TYLER
You know we're gonna be out all night long until the sun comes up!

TAYLOR
Heck yeah, going on a candy spree!

TYLER
Heh, I get it, "killing spree".

TAYLOR
Well duh, definitely a candy spree, and see that silly ghost of yours and then just go play some Halloween tricks!

JULIE
I got a few people I need to get back at...

CREEPY CLERK
You don't want to be staying out on Halloween night, or any night in October for that matter...

TYLER
Okay, um, Crazy Clerk, why the hell wouldn't we want to stay out on Halloween or any October night?

CREEPY CLERK
That crazed psychotic killer is still on the loose! Have you kids been on some serious marijuana or something? Donald Grizzler's sti--!

JULIE
Okay, just stop! Can you please just type these in so I can give you our money and go?

TAYLOR
What's wrong, Julie, I'd like to know who this Donald Grizzler is...

TYLER
Yeah, Julie, why so worried off?

JULIE
I'll tell you guys the story later when we get back... Thank you, Mr. Creepy Clerk, Happy Halloween to you sir..

CREEPY CLERK
Dumb kids and those Peter Vincent radio shows...
(CONTINUED) .15

SCENE 8: DETECTIVE SCRIMM AND CARRIE'S NEW ASSIGNMENT

INT. DETECTIVE'S OFFICE / AFTERNOON

Detective Scrimm, is in his office and finishes a call from his buddy Ralph about the concert-goers parking in his boss's parking lot, and Detective Scrimm having to hang up after realizing he had to get Carrie to patrol the Grizzler place from people going in.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Ralph, Ralph, Ralph, now listen to me...if Jack wants to keep those jerk-off concert-goers out of his lot, it is HIS responsibility to block of those lanes from letting those kids break in and to park their damn cars there over night!...(pauses to let Ralph reply)...Well I'm sure it's a bad look for him and his business...(pauses to let Ralph reply)...The way I see it with him having to deal with those ass-headed cops directing that concert traffic out there in the road and those concert pricks, he'd rip his own ass off and wear it as earmuffs...(pauses to let Ralph reply)...Well, I have work to do this weekend, some crazies are causing loads of shit to happen in our town...(pauses to let Ralph reply)...Yeah, same reports of disappearances and only finding remains that can't lead us to catch this freak, and I hate going to those families to tell them the bad news...(sighs) Every Hallo-fuckin'-ween...I just hope we catch this guy...Chief told me to get my best guys on with this case, I'm sending Carrie down at that Grizzler place to investigate, because that's where we usually find the stuff but we looked ourselves and we couldn't find the bodies...(pauses to let Ralph reply)...Alright, well listen, I'll be around tonight, so call me as soon as your finished, just do what that jackass wants and we'll talk this over dinner...bring your wife along too...okay, man, good luck.

(CUT TO) Detective Scrimm calls Carrie on his radio and they both talk; Detective Scrimm telling Carrie to patrol the Grizzler area to keep people out. (CUT TO) Doing a switching scene/shot-to-scene/shot with both of the characters.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Carrie, come in.

CARRIE
Yeah, go ahead.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Listen, I know you need to visit your mom this weekend, but I really need you to do some patrolling around that Grizzler place outside of town for the rest of the week, can you take this shift for me?
(CONTINUED) .16

CARRIE
(Sighs) Y-Yeah, I guess I can call my mom up and tell her...

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
I apologize, deputy, I really do, but I just need to keep people from sneaking into that place and if you find anything out of the ordinary, you let me and know. I'll be sending Bruce and Lutter down to join you.

CARRIE
Yeah, got it. But why're you being so alert about this place, sir?

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
I'll let you know as soon as you get there, okay?

CARRIE
Yes, sir.

(CUT TO) Carrie takes out her gun and cocks it to make sure it's loaded and then drives away in her car out of the shot.

SCENE 9: DEAD KIDS AT PLAY

INT. JOHNNY'S HOUSE / AFTERNOON

1 boy: Johnny gets off the phone telling his friend Reggie to meet him at Liker's Lane.

JOHNNY
Yeah, so just meet me up at Liker's Lane and we can head up to that haunted house up the trail...don't be such a wuss...'kay, bye.

(CUT TO) 1 little girl: Johnny's Sister walks up to Johnny as he starts to leave, complaining to him that mom said he would help her try out her ghost costume, but Johnny tells her that mom is an idiot for thinking that his sister's costume is great and he says for her to go cry to mom to help her with her costume, but she only wants Johnny to help her and Johnny says who'd ever want to help you.

JOHNNY'S SISTER
Johnny?

JOHNNY
What?



(CONTINUED) .17

JOHNNY'S SISTER
I want you to help me get my spooky ghost costume on so I can show Grandma Lois!

JOHNNY
No.

JOHNNY'S SISTER
Why not?

JOHNNY
Because I don't want to, and I'm going out tonight anyways, so tell her.

JOHNNY'S SISTER
Please? I want you to help me!

JOHNNY
No!

JOHNNY'S SISTER
Mom says you HAVE to, and she said you couldn't go out at night!

JOHNNY
Well your Mom is a stupid adopted lesbian for thinking that your ghost costume is so spooky, because you know what? It's dumb! And you're dumb too! Who ever wants to help you anyway?!

(CUT TO) Johnny then leaves, and we see Johnny's Sister making a very sad face and making two sobs to show she was about to cry. (CUT TO) We look though the eyes of Grizzler, as we watch Johnny from a distance as he walks away to the side of his house.

EXT. LIKER'S LANE / EVENING

At the path way toward Grizzler's house, Johnny is walking along a path way looking around to see where Reggie is. (CUT TO) We hear Grizzler's echoing demonic laughter surround Johnny, Johnny getting a bit frightened and looks around in terror, his spine tingling.

GRIZZLER
MUAHAHERHERHAAA!!!

(CUT TO) Then all is quiet and we then see a 2nd boy: Reggie pops out of nowhere and tackles on top of Johnny, Reggie is dressed up in a creepy mummy-like zombie costume with a creepy mask on and Johnny scolds him and tells him he likes his costume and it'll be good to scare away some little kids. (CUT TO) Johnny asks Reggie if he stole that bag of candy his parents were saving for
(CONTINUED) .18

Halloween tomorrow, Reggie takes out the bag and they both feast as they talk about scaring all the kids and stealing their candy and then TP'ing some houses. (CUT TO) Reggie talks about Mr. McCall's house that he wants to screw his hot daughter and then pee on his face.

JOHNNY
Reggie? AHH!!! (After being scared) Reggie, you trying to give me a heart-attack?! You scared me!

REGGIE
Sorry man! I wanted to see if it was scary enough!

JOHNNY
Wow, I really like it, I bet it'll scare the shit out of those other stupid little kids!

REGGIE
You think so?

JOHNNY
I know so! Look into a mirror why don't you?

REGGIE
Heheh, yeah, thanks, my mom made all of this just for me...

JOHNNY
She must be really screwed up then..

REGGIE
She is at times..you should see her when my Aunt Judy's around her! Always going at each other like vultures ripping half a dead liver...

JOHNNY
Did you get the candy bag from your mom and dad?

REGGIE
Yeah, right here... (Takes out the candy bag for them to feast on)

JOHNNY
So here's our plan, we'll get on our costumes, scare the hell out the little kids over at the groves up the street and just steal their bags of candy, and then we can go T'P some houses, how does that sound?

REGGIE
Hellz yeah, sounds like a plan to me! I wanted to go mess around Mr. McCall's house anyways...
(CONTINUED) .19

JOHNNY
Yeah, and leave a love letter to that hot-ass daughter of his?

REGGIE
Hell yeah, man, I mean I just had this vision that I was gonna do her in her bed the other night, and after I'd make her scream I'd go sneaking over to Mr. McCall's room and pee on his face as he sleeps!

Johnny laughs.

REGGIE
I could, y'know, I really could, because he always makes fun of me and my family, always calling us names...racist-sonofabitch!

(CUT TO) As Reggie and Johnny start talking crap about Grizzler's life and how they're going to go vandalize his house as soon as they get there, we then see Grizzler walking right behind them, following them as they talk, moving his axe side-to-side wondering who to kill first, Johnny or Reggie.

REGGIE
So why are we going up this trail, anyways? What's this haunted house you're talking about?

JOHNNY
You don't know what happened there? At the Grizzler house?

REGGIE
No, not really, all I knew was two people used to live there and now the place was empty.

JOHNNY
Yeah, some father and his son were living there, and the son was getting all pissed off because his dad beat him up a lot, I think he was a drunk or something...Anyways, the son starts to get into devil stuff and claims some demon told him to kill his father...and then the father burned his son alive or something...And--

(CUT TO) Johnny and Reggie then hear Grizzler's foot steps, they both stop and turn around, but Grizzler is no where to be found around them, so then the kids keep walking. (CUT TO) But we then see Grizzler's hand grab around Reggie's face, making Reggie drop a sucker he was about to open up and eat, getting pulled back and we hear a loud flesh wound of Grizzler's axe. (CUT TO) Grizzler cuts off Reggie's head (Though we don't see it happen).



(CONTINUED) .20

JOHNNY
So anyway..then the kid takes some hatchet or something and kills his dad..and then he cuts his dad up and eats up what ever...it's a queer story, but I heard it really happened...and that his ghost haunts the place now...

(CUT TO) Johnny notices Reggie drops his candy and says he'll get it for him, but then when he turns back to see Reggie we see Reggie's headless corpse walking toward Johnny, before falling to its knees and falls to the ground. (CUT TO) Johnny falls on his back and looks back at the corpse and looks around himself, as we hear Grizzler's echoing demonic laugh again.

GRIZZLER
MUAHAHERHERHAAA!!!

JOHNNY
AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

(CUT TO) As Johnny sits up with his hands, we see Grizzler smash his axe blade on three of Johnny's fingers, cutting them off completely, making Johnny scream in terror and in pain as he grabs his hand and then looks up at Grizzler and screams as he turns and runs. (CUT TO) We see Johnny and Grizzler running through the path, as Grizzler throws his axe at Johnny, hoping to cut off his head, but Johnny dodges it but the axe cuts off his left ear. (CUT TO) Johnny falls to the ground and holds his ear in pain as Grizzler then walks up to him, taking his axe back and then he grabs Johnny's right leg by his foot and violently chops on his foot before cutting it off, with gore and blood spurting out of the severed leg stump. (CUT TO) Johnny gets up screaming as he holds his leg, running/limping away from Grizzler. (CUT TO) Grizzler lift up his mask just over his mouth, as he eats a piece of flesh off of Johnny's foot, before putting his mask back down and running after him. (CUT TO) We see Johnny running/limping along a path against a metal fence, as Grizzler follows behind. (CUT TO) Johnny then falls over a side of the hill and into a puddle of mud and trying to escape before Grizzler could get him, we don't see Grizzler following him, but Johnny then climbs up a hill top trying to claw his way out of the mud, he looks around as he hears Grizzler's echoing demonic laughter.

GRIZZLER
MUAHAHERHERHAAA!!!

(CUT TO) Then we see Reggie's arm poke out from the top of the hill, and Johnny takes his hand, saying thanks, Reggie, I thought I was a goner, before looking up and seeing it's Reggie's severed arm and Grizzler's holding it, Johnny screams in terror before Grizzler takes his axe and stabs it down at Johnny's face.
(CONTINUED) .21

JOHNNY
Oh god, thanks, Reg...I thought I was a goner--....AHHHHHHHUHHHUHHHHHHAHHH!!!!

(CUT TO) Grizzler chops Johnny's head and face in half in a rough and gory blow.

EXT. JOHNNY'S HOUSE / EVENING

At Johnny's house, we get a shot of Johnny's house. (CUT TO) Johnny's Sister opens the front door to head outside, she's wearing her ghost costume, as Johnny's Mother calls out to her from in the house to wait for her on the porch so she can take her to Grandma Lois's to show him her costume.

JOHNNY'S MOM
Now wait on the porch for me, I need to get my camera, and we'll be going to Grandma Lois's! I wonder where your brother is?

(CUT TO) Johnny's Sister then looks down and picks up a bag of candy, the same kind Reggie and Johnny were sharing, and she looks around to see who left it there. (CUT TO) And then happily eats a piece of the candy.

SCENE 10: THE STORY OF DONALD GRIZZLER

INT. JULIE'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Julie and Taylor and Tyler all sit together in her family room as they set up a casual fire at the fire place. (CUT TO) Tyler complains that he hates it when Halloween ends, Taylor agrees with him. (CUT TO) Tyler then starts to question about what the Creepy Clerk was telling them back at the Halloween store about "Grizzler" somebody. (CUT TO) Julie asks scary story anyone? and Tyler says One should keep my spirits up. (CUT TO) Taylor agrees and Julie starts to talk about Donald Grizzler, just like in the comic book.

TYLER
Two more days until Halloween...

TAYLOR
Yeah, tomorrow we're carvin' pumpkins!

JULIE
With my own money...

TAYLOR
I'm sure it won't be that bad, Julie.

(CONTINUED) .22

JULIE
Yeah right, with things getting out of hand as time goes on, we won't be able to afford those bottles of Coke like we usually like to...

TYLER
Well, maybe it'll be worth it for whatever we can get before Halloween comes too quickly...Man, I hate it when Halloween's almost over..

TAYLOR
Yeah, tell me about it.

TYLER
And hey, Julie, why didn't you want that creepy clerk back at that costume store to tell us about this Donald Grizzle-Grizzler guy? Was he your famous relative or something? Or your dad?

TAYLOR
Shut up, Tyler! That wasn't funny...

JULIE
No...he was just some scary folk tale my Grandmother told me about when I went to visit her two years ago...Now it seems the whole town is in on it...

TAYLOR
But why?

JULIE
Because they think it's real, saying if you stay out too late on Halloween night he'll come and get you...

TYLER
Hey, I like this story so far...tell us about it!

TAYLOR
Yeah, go for it, girlfriend!

JULIE
Well...alright, but just because we need some more Halloween spirit to cheer us up..

TYLER
Definitely

TAYLOR
Yeah!

(CUT TO) We see all sorts of flash backs as Julie tells the
(CONTINUED) .23

story...Getting a full shot of Grizzler's house, being out in the creepy woods.

JULIE
It was about four years ago, these two hillbillies lived in the woods outside of our town of Notting Hand..Donald Grizzler and his father Father Grizzler...the mom died long ago from some sickness..so it was Donald and his dad..

(CUT TO) Grizzler then finishes painting his clown mask and then puts it on and tries to scare himself in the mirror.

JULIE
And Donald's dad was trying to not let their back-woods heritage slip away...but Donald just loved only one of our society's beloved holidays...Halloween....He loved it so much he made his own clown mask out of wood, paint, and some straps to hold on his head...and before you know it he slips it on every night and tries to scare himself when he was looking into his bedroom mirror..

(CUT TO) Julie looking at Tyler and Taylor as if trying to make her expression a bit chilling as she tells the story.

JULIE
And when Father Grizzler found out about his little Don-Boy breaking the heritage with his Halloween nonsense...he beat Donald over the head about twenty-three times to get it all out of his mind...

(CUT TO) Seeing Father Grizzler pouring kerosene all over Grizzler while he's in bed, before leaving the room and putting the cap back onto the bottle of kerosene.

JULIE
But Donald Grizzler still loved Halloween in secret, regardless how many beatings he got...but his father still knew about his Halloween lust, and so Father Grizzler poured a bunch of kerosene all over Donald's body while he was a sleep in his bed...thinking it'll get them Halloween ideas out of Donald's head...

(CUT TO) Grizzler and Father Grizzler walk out in the woods to hunt, Grizzler carrying his axe as Father Grizzler carries his pipe and his rifle.

JULIE
The next morning...Donald and his dad go out for some hunting in the woods...Grizzler carrying his axe...and his daddy carrying a rifle and a pipe..

(CONTINUED) .24

(CUT TO) Father Grizzler takes out his match and lits it to puff up his pipe.

JULIE
Father Grizzler lights up his pipe...

(CUT TO) Father Grizzler then flicks the lit match over his right shoulder toward Donald.

JULIE
And then he flicks his match at Donald....

(CUT TO) Julie looking at Taylor and Tyler to see if they're freaking out yet.

JULIE
Burning him alive!

(CUT TO) Seeing Grizzler's burning hand reaching out to Father Grizzler, screaming in pain as his father just looks back at him.

GRIZZLER
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(CUT TO) Grizzler is in the house, finishing painting the wall with red paint in his hands, a pentagram, and begins to pray to it to ask the devil to help him, seeing the pentagram slowly glow blood red.

JULIE
Luckily, Donald survived, but was badly burned, his right eye was melted off along with his nose, his lips, his chin almost, his right ear was all melted off...Donald then made a small pentagram on his wall making a ritual to speak to the Devil, to help him get revenge on his dad so he can celebrate Halloween forever....and the Devil told Donald to go get his father, cut him up with his own axe into tiny pieces and eat him...

(CUT TO) Julie looking at Tyler and Taylor.

JULIE
If Donald Grizzler did this, not only would the corpse he ate taste like candy, but he would be given the powers of Hell to celebrate Halloween forever...but he would only be able to come out in the month of October, and he would have to kill more victims too and chop them up and eat them up like candy aswell to keep the deal tied with the Devil..

(CUT TO) Grizzler puts on his clown mask and looks over to his axe, realizing it'll be his signature weapon for his deed from
(CONTINUED) .25

now on. (CUT TO) Grizzler sneaks up behind Father Grizzler while Father Grizzler is looking in his truck for a wrench, and Grizzler lifts up his axe, and as Father Grizzler turns around, Grizzler smashes the axe into his head, brains splattering all over the place.

JULIE
And so Donald puts on his clown mask, taking his axe and goes outside to see Father Grizzler while he's looking for a wrench in his truck, and when Grizzler's standing behind him...raising his axe....Father Grizzler turns around and then WHAM!!! Grizzler chops his axe right into his dad's face..brains and blood going everywhere!

(CUT TO) Grizzler drags Father Grizzler over to the table, slapping him onto the table, and chops his axe everywhere, hacking his father's body up with blood and gore going everywhere, Grizzler cutting up Father Grizzler's hand into pieces.

JULIE
Donald then drags his father's corpse back into the house and chops his father into pieces just as the Devil told him to...hacking him up limb-from-limb...

(CUT TO) Donald sits down putting his clown mask to his side, taking the piles-and-pieces of meat in his hands and chews them up and eats them into his jaws, never seeing his face. (CUT TO) Now only his mouth crunching up the meat before cutting over to Tyler's mouth.

JULIE
He takes all the pieces of meat and crunches them down...and as the Devil said...they DID taste like candy.

(CUT TO) Seeing Tyler's mouth crunch onto a chocolate bar, enjoying the story so far. (CUT TO) Tyler sits up with Taylor at his side holding him a bit, but she looks a bit freaked out about the story so far.

TYLER
Heheh, all this talk about eating chopped-up corpses and candy is making me hungry.

TAYLOR
Ewww!!!

(CUT TO) Julie enjoying their likeness of the story, as she then thinks of a local named Mr. Romero, thinking putting him in the story would make it more fun.
(CONTINUED) .26

JULIE
Hey, you guys remember what happened to Mr. Romero?

TYLER
Yeah, they said he died of a heart attack..

TAYLOR
That was only like five days ago..

JULIE
Well...I think I know what really happened to him...

TAYLOR
What do you mean?

JULIE
Well...they said he was cutting up wood, wasn't he?

TYLER
Yeah, because it always gets cold in October.

JULIE
That's right...he was cutting up some wood...and he only had two more left before he'd take them in for the fire...but that was when Grizzler came up behind him, hovering his axe over his head...ready to smash it in his head...until....he decides to drop the axe...

TYLER
HA! That was lame...What did he do next? Dress up into a ballet outfit and played with his bells?

JULIE
No!....

(CUT TO) Seeing Grizzler ripping off Mr. Romero's arms off in a bloody/gory fashion, Mr. Romero screaming in sharp pain.

JULIE
He took Mr. Romero's arms and ripped them off!!

TYLER
Cool!

(CUT TO) Grizzler then takes his axe and slashes it across Mr. Romero's belly open, his guts pouring all over his lap, as Grizzler then pulls them out and T'Ps them onto a tree.



(CONTINUED) .27

JULIE
Grizzler then took his axe and slashes it across Mr. Romero's stomach, pouring his guts out...before taking a handful and ripping them out and throws them onto a tree close by, TP'ing it.

TYLER
That's creative.

(CUT TO) Grizzler then grabs Mr. Romero around his neck, taking his axe and smashes it across his head and face, blasting the remains out, blood and gore going everywhere.

JULIE
Before he then takes Mr. Romero by the neck and slashes his brains out with one swing of his axe!

(CUT TO) Taylor gets more and more creeped out by the end of the story, Tyler likes it a lot so far, Julie just has a ball as she continues to tell the story.

TAYLOR
That's just too creepy! It was only a heart attack!

TYLER
Actually, my buddies were at the crime scene, they said there was no body, just blood and guts all over the place.

JULIE
And all that was left was Mr. Romero's hatchet and the two logs he never got to cut...

(CUT TO) Taylor gets too creeped out and Tyler asks Julie what happened to her grandma, and Julie says she died of old age, but the morticians wouldn't let her see her body in the casket at the funeral.

TYLER
Heh, I think you overdid it, Julie...

JULIE
Good!

TAYLOR
Yeah, it's getting too dark, Tyler, can we go to sleep now?

JULIE
Hah, I can't believe you guys bought that stupid legend...heheheh...pot-smokers..


(CONTINUED) .28

TYLER
So, what happened to your Grandma?

JULIE
She died of "old age" weeks after she told me this story...Me and the family went to the funeral..but the morticians wouldn't let us see inside her casket..

TYLER
How come?

JULIE
Because all--

TAYLOR
O-KAY...can we just go to sleep now? This IS a slumber party, you know?

TYLER
Yeah, alright, goodnight, scaredy-cat!

TAYLOR
Goodnight, stupid..

JULIE
Goodnight, guys...

(CUT TO) Then everyone decides to just sleep.

SCENE 11: GRIZZLER'S NEXT COURSE

INT. GRIZZLER'S HOME / NIGHT

Grizzler chops up more and more bodies into pieces. (CUT TO) Then Grizzler brings everything to his satanic alter and takes off his mask and begins eating up the chopped up corpses, never seeing his face, but getting a shot of his mouth.

SCENE 12: CARRIE'S DISCOVERY

INT. LIKER'S LANE / MORNING

Seeing the sun rise up a bit, but it's not bright and sunny of a day, a darkening yellow colored background is in the air, Halloween is on the way. (CUT TO) Carrie is touching up the evidence of bits and pieces of Reggie's costume and his mask. (CUT TO) Wondering if this will ever make sense to her of where the bodies went.

SCENE 13: JULIE AND TAYLOR SEE MISSING FAMILIAR FACES
(CONTINUED) .29

INT. GROCERY STORE / AFTERNOON

Julie and Taylor are at the grocery store shopping for four pumpkins to make jack-o-lanterns out of, as Taylor talks to Julie about how cool it'll be to see Mr. Jackson's house when it's decorated with Halloween stuff and to tell her more about Grizzler, is he a ghost? Is he a zombie? Julie says she doesn't know, but Grizzler couldn't be a ghost or zombie because he didn't die in the fire, but jokes that maybe he did die maybe because he got AIDS from having sex with a farm animal and they both laugh.

TAYLOR
It'll be so cool to be going by Mr. Jackson's house while trick-or-treating, always having his house decorated with so much scary stuff, it's a thrill!

JULIE
Yeah, I liked that fake road kill cat he had on his driveway, having us walk on it just makes the urge to get candy even creepier!

TAYLOR
Yeah, I know! It's so realistic and it made me squeal a lot because it was so icky!

JULIE
Those spiders and pumpkin heads were pretty cool too, he just has this nice sense-of-touch with his decorations when Halloween comes a'knockin'.

TAYLOR
Yeah. Hey Julie, could you tell me more about that Grizzler guy you were telling me and Tyler about last night?

JULIE
What more could I tell you? He's a killer who hacks and eats people...

TAYLOR
Well I mean, sure he's a killer, but what kind of killer? Is he a ghost? Is he a zombie?

JULIE
I don't think he's a ghost or a zombie, I never said he died when he was doing all this devil stuff and killing people...




(CONTINUED) .30

TAYLOR
Oh, I would've thought he was a ghost, because it seemed like when he got into that little girl's face, it would've seemed like he magically reappeared in front of her when she was looking back to see if he was chasing her...or something...

JULIE
Maybe he did die, maybe he didn't, all my Grandma said was that he only comes out around October and no one could catch him, and those that tried to catch him disappeared without a trace, except their blood trails.

TAYLOR
Man...

JULIE
On the other hand, he IS a hillbilly, isn't he?

TAYLOR
Yes?

JULIE
Maybe he did die from getting AIDS while having sex with a farm animal!

(CUT TO) Taylor then stops when she and Julie see "MISSING" posters of familiar people they know: Witch Woman, Johnny, Reggie, Jeff, Barry, and Ryan. (CUT TO) Taylor says the two kids, Johnny and his sister, were the same kids she babysat a few days ago. (CUT TO) Julie says Jeff, Barry, and Ryan were those boys who were trying to date her to get her sister. (CUT TO) As Julie and Taylor walk away to go buy more stuff, Julie says that it's strange that every October people seem to disappear without a trace or a reason.

TAYLOR
Hey, look at that...

JULIE
"Missing"?

TAYLOR
Those boys, Johnny and Reggie...I babysat him and his little sister a few days ago...

JULIE
I know those three guys...they were some of those boys that were using me to get with my sister...


(CONTINUED) .31

TAYLOR
And who's that woman? I think I've seen her before, always dressing up like a witch...

JULIE
Weird...well I guess she's more into the spirit than everyone else..

TAYLOR
Yeah, maybe someone got jealous and kidnapped her or something, hahahah.

JULIE
Strange, though. Every October some people end up missing...a lot...without a trace or reason.

(CUT TO) A punk: Eddy is hiding someplace close to the girls as he over-hears their every conversation, having to let Julie's boyfriend, Mike, know about what her plans are for having to post-pone their date, as Eddy then walks over to an isle to talk to Mike, as Mike finishes talking with his other punk buddy, Mike's Punk, Mike then turns to Eddy for the info.

MIKE
So what's up with my girl? Any good reason should didn't have time for us?

EDDY
See, uh, your gal is going out trick-or-treating with her friends on Halloween.

MIKE
Her friends?

EDDY
Yeah..

MIKE
What? With that scuzzbag Taylor and that freak Tyler? The freak twins?

EDDY
They're not twins...

MIKE
I don't care! They're still loser freaks, and so is she...We've got to do something to humiliate that stupid skank...no girl ditches out on a date with me to play kid stuff with freak friends!

(CONTINUED) .32

Mike looks at both Mike's Punk and then back to Eddy.

MIKE
Any payback ideas, boys?

SCENE 14: CARRIE IS BEING WATCHED

INT. THE FIELDS / AFTERNOON

Carrie is on her patrol, driving in her car while in the fields toward the Grizzler place, and she then stops for a moment to call up Detective Scrimm to ask where the other guys were.

CARRIE
Scrimm, Scrimm.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Deputey Carrie, what's up?

CARRIE
I've patrolled the area, and I've found some strange scenes here...that were quite disturbing...also I've been out here for a couple of nights and I waited for your boys to come along and I haven't seen them come at all...

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Are you sure?

CARRIE
Yes, sir.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Strange...very, very strange...Listen, deputy, come back to the station and gather up a team to investigate the scene...

CARRIE
Right away sir, but...what about the guys?

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
I just have a hunch they could be there somewhere...

CARRIE
What do you mean...?

(CUT TO) Suddenly, she hears Grizzler's echoing demonic laugh, and quickly stops and looks around.

GRIZZLER
MUAHAHERHERHAAA!!!

(CONTINUED) .33

(CUT TO) To her, nothing's out of the ordinary, nothing's there.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Deputey Carrie? Deputey Carrie? What's going on over there?

CARRIE
Nothing, sir.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Are you sure?

CARRIE
Yes, sir, I'm going to go back home to let my sister know she needs to be home early and then I'll head straight to the station.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Good idea, get here as quick as you possibly can.

CARRIE
But listen, it's Halloween tomorrow, sir, will it be a problem if I wanted to keep an eye on my little sister while her and her friends go trick-or-treating, just so they don't get into trouble?

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Alright, Carrie, but I want you to carry heavy arms, we still have a kidnapping muderer on our hand, keep an eye out for any suspicious characters...

CARRIE
Yes, sir, I'll be careful.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Alright, drive safely.

(CUT TO) Carrie drives away, as she does we view over to a secret spot seeing a cop car with blood stained everywhere, the two other cops that were coming were caught by Grizzler.

SCENE 15: PUMPKINS

INT. JULIE'S HOUSE / NIGHT

(CUT TO) Julie, Taylor and Tyler lay out all their lit jack-o-lanterns, along with Carrie's, Julie's is a vampire, Taylor's is a witch, Tyler's is a classic funny face, Carrie's is a werewolf.

TAYLOR
ATo view links or images in this forum your post count must be 5 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. you made one for your sister too?
(CONTINUED) .34

JULIE
Yes...

TAYLOR
That's very nice, Julie! And so cool too!

JULIE
Yours is a classic, Tyler.

TYLER
Can't complain.

(CUT TO) Julie, Taylor, and Tyler stand together and look up at the moon, saying tomorrow's Halloween, and Tyler saying it'll be the greatest because he tells them they'll still be going to see the ghost in the alley.

JULIE
Tomorrow's Halloween.

TYLER
Yeah, well don't sound so down about it, it hasn't begun yet, and we have that ghost to look forward to.

TAYLOR
Yeah, you're right.

JULIE
I just hope it's a real ghost, or else I'll kick your ass if it's just a stupid flashlight gig.

(CUT TO) Julie, Taylor, and Tyler then see Carrie driving into the driveway.

TYLER
Here comes Carrie...

JULIE
What the hell does she want?

(CUT TO) Carrie gets out of her car and walks toward the house, saying she needs to get a drink and to tell Julie she needs to be home by 7pm because of what's going on around the Grizzler area. (CUT TO) Julie pouts, and Tyler tries to convince Carrie that he could look after Julie and Taylor, but Carrie then sweet-talks him, as she uses "persuasive body language" and boob-fondling to get Tyler to agree with her.



(CONTINUED) .35

CARRIE
Hey, gang, just came home to get a little drink before I have to go back to the station.

JULIE
Why? I thought they told you to watch over those fields or something.

CARRIE
They did, but now they just want me to go back and get an investigation team to go around that place because I found some pretty distrubing stuff...

TYLER
Alright! So how disturbing?

CARRIE
Disturbing as in Roddy McDowall's butt, it was something about some missing kids that didn't live too far from us in this town.

TAYLOR
Yeah, me and Julie saw some posters at the grocery store today about missing people, those two kids I babysat a few days ago, and Julie was saying something about other guys that were...trying to patch through her to get you or something...

CARRIE
Oh, ha, ha, how sweet, well that reminds me...Julie, I want you to be back home by 7pm sharp, not later than.

JULIE
What? Come on! That's only an hour for me to trick-or-treat with Taylor and Tyler!

CARRIE
Well, I'm sorry, but there's an abducting whacko running around and it's too dangerous for you to stay out at later nights...you'll be home by 7pm sharp, or I'll come looking for you and humiliate you in front of everyone.

JULIE
You wouldn't dare do that, you prissy little --!








(CONTINUED) .36

TYLER
Hey, hey, hey, hey, hey! Come on now, you two! Now, Carrie, I'm sure a sweet, lovable, and completely protective woman like you would understand that Julie here is more than old enough to go out trick-or-treating with her buddies...even though she's a bit too young, HOWEVER...Me and Taylor are more than ever happy to protect little Julie with our useless lives and promise to come back in one piece..say...maybe at 8 or 9 at least? Come on, you can trust me.

CARRIE
Tyler...baby...I think it's very cute and "ballsy" what you're explaining to me...and you know as a kind and helping deputey police officer of her community, I'd look up to you and say "If I could really risk you watching over my little sister, I would rip my balls off and tape them to yours", but, seeing is how you're a very sweet boy, trying to convince a gal whose brain is bigger than her tits like myself, I'd rather have you do as I say, so I wouldn't put handcuffs on you and..."impose my arrest" on that candy ass of yours....

TYLER
(Gulps)

CARRIE
Now...can you be a dear and....have her back by 7 or 6:30?

JULIE
What?!

(CUT TO) Tyler agrees, though having his left hand behind his back, crossing his fingers, Julie sees and tries to keep her excitement held in.

TYLER
Yes, Carrie, whatever you say.

CARRIE
Thanks, babe.

(CUT TO) Carrie playfully licks Tyler's lips firmly before she goes inside.

TYLER
Woah...

SCENE 16: GRIZZLER'S CUTTING EDGE

INT. GRIZZLER'S HOME / NIGHT

(CONTINUED) .37

Grizzler cuts and chops up more bodies into pieces. (CUT TO) Seeing Grizzler put his mask on. (CUT TO) Grizzler steps to his doorway and looks up at the moon...ready for Halloween.

SCENE 17: IT'S HALLOWEEN AND JULIE LEAVES FOR TYLER'S HOUSE

October 31, 1986

Halloween

Getting about 5 shots of Halloween-feeling backdrops.

INT. JULIE'S HOUSE / AFTERNOON

(CUT TO) At Julie's house, Julie pours in candy into a bowl to leave out for the kids, and the door bell rings. (CUT TO) Julie answers the door and it's Taylor, asking if she's ready to go meet Tyler and they both leave after Julie puts the bowl down on her doorstep.

TAYLOR
Trick-or-treat!

JULIE
Taylor! Happy Halloween! Your costume looks great!

TAYLOR
Hey, Julie! Yours does too, you ready to go meet Tyler?

JULIE
Yeah, let's go!

SCENE 18: GRIZZLER GOES OUT

GRIZZLER'S HOME / NIGHT

Grizzler creepily walks out of his house, and walks through the woods to get to the town. (CUT TO) Endlessly repeating in his demonic voice: "HAPPY HALLOWEEN" before laughing each time.

GRIZZLER
Happy Halloween!!!!! MUAHAHERHERHAAA!!!

SCENE 19: TRICK-OR-TREATING

INT. NEIGHBORHOOD / NIGHT

Getting a shot of the full moon. Halloween night.

Soon, we see about 5 other Trick-or-Treaters and Julie, Taylor
(CONTINUED) .38

and Tyler going to houses saying "trick-or-treat", having fun and collecting candy, running across the streets to get to the next house. (CUT TO) Julie and Taylor wondering what they both got in their trick-or-treat bags.

JULIE
This is great!

TAYLOR
Yeah! What did you get?

JULIE
I got some chocolate-covered marsh mellow pumpkins and..

(CUT TO) Mike, Mike's Punk, and Eddy creep to a side of a house with prank supplies, Mike has a carton of eggs, Mike's Punk has red spray paint, and Eddy has a disposable camera, and Mike goes over the plan as they watch Julie and her friends.

MIKE
Now are you sure those are the right girls over there?

EDDY
Mikey, why would I lie to you?

MIKE
It's "Mike".

EDDY
Sorry...but yeah, that's them over there!

MIKE
Okay, good! I want you and him to go around back here and watch out for me, when I go out and throw the eggs at her and her cat friend, you come out and spray their costumes, mess'em up, and you come out and "take pictures for the school's yearbook", got it?

EDDY
Yeah.

MIKE'S PUNK
Yeah.

MIKE
Alright, get going!

(CUT TO) Mike's Punk and Eddy rush over to the other side of the house, awaiting the signal. (CUT TO) We see Julie and Taylor walking up to the next house getting closer to where Mike could
(CONTINUED) .39

come out and prank her, seeing Tyler running up behind them to catch up. (CUT TO) Mike smiles with glee as he then walks forward for the attack, but Grizzler walks into his way, Mike getting a bit startled and a bit annoyed, thinking it's some bozo in a costume, wanting him to get out of the way.

MIKE
Hey, buddy, get out of my way!

(CUT TO) As Mike tries to walk by Grizzler, Grizzler takes Mike by his neck, lifting him off the ground, almost crushing his throat as Mike fights back and tries to yell for help, but his lyrics are covered by his choking, Mike's hands trying to get Grizzler to let go of his neck, as Grizzler then takes his axe and slashes it into Mike's left hip lifting him and ripping him in half, blood and gore splattering everywhere, before Grizzler then walks to the back of the house. (CUT TO) Eddy and Mike's Punk are waiting, giggling as they watch Julie, Taylor, and Tyler trick-or-treat.

EDDY
This is gonna be so great! We're finally exposing that dumb blond and her stupid friends!

MIKE'S PUNK
Yeah, I just wish Mike would hurry up, it should time now...

(CUT TO) Eddy and Mike's Punk start to wonder as they keep watching the trick-or-treaters walk by.

EDDY
Yeah, you're kind of right..where the hell's our cue?

(CUT TO) Eddy and Mike's punk then look at each other, hearing footsteps behind them, they both turn around and see Grizzler, as Grizzler takes Mike's head that's wrapped around in a coil of his organs. (CUT TO) Grizzler then throws Mike's head but holds the end of his organs attached to his neck stump, T'Ping a tree in front of Eddy and Mike's Punk, as they look up and see the head is Mike's as they both turn around and see Grizzler let go of the organs and turns toward them lifting his axe. (CUT TO) Eddy and Mike's Punk both run away, dropping the camera and paint, screaming their heads off. (CUT TO) Grizzler follows his head to them as they run, but then seeing a police car with Carrie driving it park in a parking lot for a park across the street, and he walks over to it. (CUT TO) Taylor and Julie looking over to see the two bodies running away screaming, Tyler and the rest of the Trick-or-Treaters doing the same.


(CONTINUED) .40

JULIE
Who were those guys?

TAYLOR
I don't know, weirdos though!

Everyone then returns to trick-or-treating.

SCENE 20: CARRIE DECLINES FOR THE NIGHT

INT. PARK PARKING LOT / NIGHT

Carrie pulls up in her police car to make sure the neighborhood's safe. (CUT TO) Nothing's wrong. Carrie then turns to look at the woods. (CUT TO) Nothing, but suddenly, Grizzler's hand pops out and grabs Carrie around her mouth, before he takes a piece of her neck and rips her neck and left tit off at the same time roughly, before he then twists Carrie's neck, making blood splash all over the car window.

SCENE 21: SCARIER THAN A GHOST

INT. ALLEY WAY / NIGHT

Getting a shot of the full moon, hearing loud gutting sounds as if Grizzler was dismembering Carrie.

(CUT TO) Julie, Taylor and Tyler decide to go to an alley where Tyler said there'd be a ghost so they don't lose their Halloween thrill.

JULIE
Now, are you sure this isn't some stupid prank with lights, Tyler?

TYLER
Are you kidding me? You can search my ass if you want to for all I care, but this for real!

TAYLOR
He could have a buddy that's in on this too.

TYLER
Do not! You can even look around the alley too if you want, it's not a set-up, fruitcakes!

JULIE
If you say so...


(CONTINUED) .41

TYLER
I promise, this'll keep the Halloween thrill going for all of us.

(CUT TO) As soon as they get halfway in the alley, they stop when they hear something move up ahead, and they slowly walk closer to investigate.

TAYLOR
What was that!?

TYLER
I don't know.

JULIE
It's probably just a cat or something, keep going Tyler...

TYLER
Always got to be the leader, the cute guy that always goes first before he's done for...

(CUT TO) A black cat goes by them and they all scream, and laugh afterward.

TYLER
AHHHHH!!

JULIE AND TAYLOR
AHHHHH!!!!

TYLER
OH...HO HO!!.....HAHAHAAAHAHAHA!!...It was only a black cat!

JULIE
Yeah, I told you I knew it!

TAYLOR
Black cats...when they walk by that sometimes means bad luck, doesn't it?

TYLER
Uh, hello? You're dressed up like a black cat, as if you haven't given us enough bad luck from the start...like making us all got to all those cool houses to get the crappiest candy on earth!

(CUT TO) Tyler, Julie, and Taylor then stop a few steps later to see Tyler's "ghost" come out.

TYLER
Here we are, ladies!

(CONTINUED) .42

JULIE
Wow, an empty lot with bits of sand and some smelly garbage next to us. This place really looks "haunted", Tyler!

TYLER
Just wait...

TAYLOR
Come on, I don't wanna be here all night, it's too creepy now that everyone's gone inside...

TYLER
Wait! Wait! Quiet! Quiet!...Look!

(CUT TO) Julie, Taylor and Tyler finally get to the spot where they actually see the ghost, the orb-light-like spirit, dis-and-reappearing on the ground and on the brick wall, before it completely disappears, a perfect end to a Halloween night.

TAYLOR
Woooow...

JULIE
You were right all along, Tyler, that was something.

TYLER
It sure as hell kept my Halloween spirit up...

JULIE
Yeah.

TAYLOR
Same goes for me.

(CUT TO) Suddenly, the three of them freak out when they hear the black cat's scream, they go to investigate.

TYLER
What the hell was that now?

TAYLOR
I don't know....Tyler, go see what it was!

TYLER
Stay behind me..

(CUT TO) They find half of the cat's carcass on the ground.

TYLER
What the hell?
(CONTINUED) .43

JULIE
Oh! God!

TAYLOR
Is that what's left of the cat?

JULIE
What does it look like, Taylor!? An after-dinner salad?!

TYLER
You girls just cool it..

JULIE
Who could do such a thing?!

TYLER
Must be a dog out here or something...

JULIE
A dog!? Tyler, look at it! A bear could be out here!! A dog couldn't eat that cat's head off with a folk and a knife!

(CUT TO) Then they hear Grizzler's laughter, making them jump in fear almost.

GRIZZLER
MUAHAHERHERHAAA!!!

(CUT TO) But Tyler just looks at the carcass and says he wants to follow its trail.

JULIE
What was that!?

TYLER
I don't know...

TAYLOR
I'm scared, Julie..

TYLER
Just calm down, Taylor, just calm down! It's probably some stupid prank some idiots are trying to pull on us...I'm going to find out who..

JULIE
Tyler, wait!

(CUT TO) Julie and Taylor follow him, getting to a corner in an area in the alley, a pitch-black corner, hearing crunching
(CONTINUED) .44

sounds, and weired moans of pleasure like Grizzler's laughter.

TYLER
Hello? Who's there? Get out here, or I'm gonna wail on you!

(CUT TO) Suddenly, Grizzler's masked face pops out of the darkness, eating and chewing the carcass under his mask, 3 inches from Tyler's face, Tyler jumping back with Julie and Taylor saying: "Christ, he's real!!".

TYLER
CHRIST! HE'S REAL!!!!!

(CUT TO) The three of them scream and run away.

TYLER
RUN!!!! DONALD GRIZZLER'S REAL!!!!!!!

EXT. STREETS / NIGHT

(CUT TO) Grizzler chases after them, throwing his axe at Taylor's leg, making her fall, but Tyler quickly picks her up, before she could hit the ground, and carries her for a few moments before letting her run again.

TAYLOR
Ow! My leg!!

TYLER
I got you, Taylor!

JULIE
Tyler, come on!!

(CUT TO) Julie, Tyler and Taylor keep running, Grizzler keeps chasing, demonically laughing loudly behind them, throwing his axe toward Tyler now, but keeps missing.

GRIZZLER
MUAHAHERHERHAAA!!!

(CUT TO) Soon Tyler spots Taylor's house up ahead, saying to Julie to run for her house.

TYLER
Julie, run for Taylor's house!!

TAYLOR
Hurry, he's coming!

(CONTINUED) .45

(CUT TO) They run inside, but Grizzler grabs Tyler's leg before he could get in, screaming as Grizzler pulled him outside, Tyler holding onto the frame of the door as Grizzler pulls him, we see Grizzler start to crush Tyler's leg.

TYLER
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! HELP ME!!! AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(CUT TO) Taylor says she'll be right back, gets her father's mini cross, and puts it on Grizzler's hand and burns him, making him let go of Tyler and they pull Tyler into the house and close/lock the door.

TAYLOR
I'LL BE RIGHT BACK!!!

TYLER
OW, MY LEG!!!

SCENE 22: TRAPPED IN THE HOUSE

INT. TAYLOR'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Julie, and Taylor try to barricade the door with chairs and hearing Grizzler's demonic roars of pain from outside, Tyler's sitting down holding and trying to comfort his broken leg.

JULIE
Hold the door! Hold it!!

TAYLOR
I'm trying!

TYLER
AHHHH! My damn leg!!

JULIE
Tyler, are you okay?

(CUT TO) Grizzler then looks in a window and was about to break in, but Taylor and Julie go to check and press the cross up on the window making Grizzler pull back then run toward the side of the house.

JULIE
He's at the window! Taylor!

TAYLOR
He's going around the back to the kitchen, come on!!

(CONTINUED) .46

(CUT TO) Julie and Taylor run back to follow from inside, as they get to the back door and Grizzler's ready to chop it down, he chops once and Taylor presses the cross on the door and Grizzler pulls back away and disappears into the darkness. (CUT TO) Julie and Taylor go back to comfort Tyler, Taylor telling Julie to get the first aid kit from the kitchen, Julie comes back with it and asks Taylor how she could stop Grizzler like that.

JULIE
He's gone...

TAYLOR
Tyler!

TYLER
Ow damn it! AHhhhhhh!

TAYLOR
Julie, there's a first aid kit in the kitchen, go get it!

JULIE
First aid kit!

TAYLOR
Good job...

TYLER
Please, please, please! Be gentle with that!

TAYLOR
I will, take it easy.

JULIE
Taylor...how did you stop Grizzler like that?

TAYLOR
You said he was like a devil-worshiper, right?

JULIE
Yeah?

TAYLOR
I'd figure if we hit him with a cross or something, we could stop him with it.

TYLER
I knew he was a vampire!

JULIE
Not a vampire, Tyler...a demon...
(CONTINUED) .47

TYLER
Oh...

(CUT TO) Tyler and Taylor argue with Julie about Grizzler being a stupid legend, Julie blames herself and walks away into the kitchen.

TAYLOR
You bitch! You told us it was only a stupid legend!

JULIE
What? I...

TYLER
Yeah, she's right...I thought you said Grizzler was just a fuckin' ghost story your crack-headed grandma told you about!

TAYLOR
Yeah, what's wrong with you telling us a cursed story?! We could've died just now because of you!!

JULIE
Look I'm sorry, okay!? I'm sorry! I didn't know trying to keep our Halloween spirits up by telling a stupid ghost story would make a possessed killer come after us!! How would I know?!!

TYLER
Julie...

(CUT TO) Getting a shot of the full moon. (CUT TO) Getting a shot of Taylor's house as we see Grizzler standing creepily in front of the house, just staring at the window. (CUT TO) Julie's just sits there in the kitchen alone, before long, Tyler and Taylor walk in and sit with her at the table and they apologize and realize they have to get to Mantall's Chapel, Tyler saying if they stay here that Grizzler guy will try to break in somewhere and pick them off. (CUT TO) Tyler says he'll try to slow him down, bragging he'll cut that sucker's head off if he had a cross and some chains. (CUT TO) Taylor then says her father keeps some supplies in the garage.

TYLER
Julie?

TAYLOR
Julie?

TAYLOR
Julie...um...we're...we're sorry we yelled at you and thought it was your fault that this all happened...
(CONTINUED) .48

TYLER
Yeah...we're sorry...we're really sorry...

JULIE
Seriously?

TYLER
Yeah...can you ever forgive us?

JULIE
Yes...you're my only friends...

TAYLOR
Thanks, Julie.

TYLER
Yeah, thanks...and if we live through this...I'll french-kiss Stephen Geoffreys..

JULIE
(Giggles)

TYLER
Okay...listen, we have to find a way to get over to Mantall's Chapel..it'll be safe there..

TAYLOR
No way! We can stay here until dawn, Grizzler has to go away until next year, right?

JULIE
Yeah, that's right, that's what the story said..

TAYLOR
We can make more crosses and..and then we can...

TYLER
Taylor, he's got an axe and we can't be at two places at once, he'll find a way in here and he'll pick us off one-by-one...

JULIE
Tyler...

TYLER
Julie, I know you don't want to go out there...hell, even I don't wanna go out there with this hurt leg of mine...but Grizzler can't be in a church, the holy powers'll keep him out...



(CONTINUED) .49

JULIE
And once this is all done...we can try and stop him from coming back next year...

TAYLOR
I'm scared..

TYLER
Don't worry, Taylor...you and Julie can make it out...I'll try and stall him...

TAYLOR
No!!

JULIE
Tyler, come on, you can't go out there!!

TYLER
I can't run with this leg, and you two can't carry me, we'll all die if we try to run away all together, I'll do what I can to slow him down, but you and Taylor have to get going to that church...we can't let Grizzler live and we can't put this town into anymore jeopardy...

TAYLOR
Tyler...

TYLER
Rest assure..I'll be damned before going out there without a weapon...I need some supplies to make a nice big cross to stab his brains out with and some chains to pin him down...

TAYLOR
My dad keeps most of those supplies in the garage...

TYLER
Let's go...

JULIE
Wait, who's going to stay behind to keep Grizzler outside while you go in the garage?

TAYLOR
Yeah, she's right...

TYLER
Why don't you stay, Julie?

JULIE
If Taylor gives me her cross...yeah I'll stay...
(CONTINUED) .50

TAYLOR
Here...just do that thing like in "Fright Night", if that bastard gets near you smash this into his forehead!

JULIE
You bet I will...

TYLER
Okay, good, come on, Taylor!

(CUT TO) Tyler and Taylor go into her garage, poor Tyler having to limp all the time, as she points out to where the supplies and tools are. (CUT TO) Soon after, Tyler gets the chains and finds planks of wood lying around, and a hammer and nails and gets to work.

TAYLOR
This is the garage, there! The supplies and nails are over there!

TYLER
Yes!...Ow...my leg...

(CUT TO) Julie tries to dial the police, but the phone line is lost, so then she sits back down at the table, playing with the cross, and looking out toward one of the windows, hearing Grizzler's demonic moans, before they fade away, thinking Grizzler's giving up.

JULIE
Taylor! Tyler! I think Grizzler's giving up! Guys! Did you hear me!?

(CUT TO) Tyler finishes up making the cross, as Taylor looks back to listen to what Julie's saying and then turns back to Tyler.

TAYLOR
Tyler, do you hear that?

TYLER
What?

TAYLOR
Julie's saying that Grizzler's giving up!

TYLER
What?

(CUT TO) Then they suddenly hear Grizzler's demonic laughter and quickly look at the garage door.

(CONTINUED) .51

GRIZZLER
MUAHAHERHERHAAA!!!

(CUT TO) Tyler goes over to investigate. (CUT TO) Suddenly Grizzler starts to smash his axe into the garage door, scaring Tyler and Taylor to the floor, Taylor trying to comfort Tyler as they look back at the garage door.

TYLER
He ain't gone...

TAYLOR
Tyler...

TYLER
(From the garage door) AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!

TAYLOR
(From the garage door) AHHHHH!!!!!

TAYLOR
Tyler are you okay?!

TYLER
Ow!!...my leg!...Uh..yeah..

(CUT TO) Grizzler tries to cut the garage door open again, and Tyler quickly limps up with Taylor running by his side as he quickly holds the cross up against the cut where Grizzler was hacking to get into.

TYLER
Taylor, help me!

TAYLOR
I'm trying!

TYLER
Gotta hold the door!

(CUT TO) Grizzler quits hacking the door because of the cross and stands back a little, and then stops a few feet when he looks over to the side of the house. (CUT TO) When Grizzler stops, Tyler keeps the cross pressed against the garage door and they listen as they hear Grizzler making a demonic "Hmm?" sound, and they hear his stomping foot steps walking to the side of the house, toward where he could get into the kitchen from outside. (CUT TO) They both look at each other, and then Tyler grabs the cross and the chains as he and Taylor go back in toward the house worrying about Julie.
(CONTINUED) .52

TYLER AND TAYLOR
Julie!

(CUT TO) Julie just sits there in front of the window where it was pitch black darkness out, unable to see anything. (CUT TO) She just fiddles with her finger tips, but we suddenly see Grizzler creepily rush across the window in the distance. (CUT TO) Julie looks back at the window quickly, thinking she heard something, getting up off the chair to the table, and just looks at the window, nothing still. (CUT TO) Suddenly, Tyler and Taylor startle her when they enter the kitchen, telling her for her and Taylor to get ready.

TAYLOR
Julie!!

JULIE
AHH!!!!

TAYLOR
Sorry, did we scare you?

TYLER
Okay, Julie and Taylor, get ready to run, 'cause in a few minutes I'm gonna...!

(CUT TO) But then...BOOM!!...Grizzler breaks his head into the window breaking in, and grabbing Julie, Julie drops Taylor's cross. (CUT TO) Tyler runs over and helps Julie get out of Grizzler's grasp, as Taylor burns his arm, Grizzler lets go and Tyler wraps the chain around Grizzler's head and arm, as he tightens it and starts to stab at Grizzler's neck, deeply cutting it, blood splattering the walls. (CUT TO) Taylor goes to help, picking up her cross off the floor and burns Grizzler's head with her cross, Grizzler goes nuts and violently pulls back into the window, but taking Tyler with him, making Tyler break his large cross in half with the window. (CUT TO) Taylor cries for Tyler's safety, but Julia grabs her and yells they have to run while they still can.

TAYLOR
NO!!! TYLER!!! NO!!!!!

JULIE
Come on, Taylor! WE HAVE TO GO NOW!!! COME ON!! LET'S GO! GO!! GO!! GO!!!

(CUT TO) Grizzler pulls up Tyler to him and grabbing his head and crushing it in his palms, his eyes popping out, and then breaks his neck off.
(CONTINUED) .53

SCENE 23: RUNNING FOR DEAR DEATH

INT. TAYLOR'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Julie and Taylor run through the hallway of the house. (CUT TO) Grizzler breaks in through the window and turns his head over to where Julie and Taylor could've gone, rushing toward the living room.

EXT. STREETS / NIGHT

(CUT TO) Julie and Taylor run out of the house screaming, hoping to get somebody's attention, as they run toward the street.

TAYLOR
AHHHHHH!!!!

JULIE
HELP!! HELP US!!!

TAYLOR
CALL THE POLICE!!!!!!!

(CUT TO) Grizzler looks out around the window and spots Julie and Taylor. (CUT TO) Julie and Taylor run out in the street. (CUT TO) Grizzler runs out the door to run after them. (CUT TO) Grizzler demonically laughing as he was running after Julie and Taylor.

GRIZZLER
MUAHAHERHERHAAA!!!

JULIE AND TAYLOR
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

(CUT TO) Soon moments later, Julie and Taylor see Grizzler isn't following them, vanished without a trace, like a ghost.

JULIE
W-Where is he?

TAYLOR
I-I don't know...

(CUT TO) But when walking across a neihbor's yard, down pops a scarecrow on top of Julie, as she and Taylor pull it off they then see it's Carrie, debouled and stuffed with hay and made to look like a scarecrow, Julie becoming extremely sympathetic, but then Julie and Taylor hear Grizzler's demonic laughter again that sends them running.

(CONTINUED) .54

JULIE
AHHHH!!!!...Carrie? Carrie!? OH MY GOD!!!!!!

GRIZZLER
MUAHAHERHERHAAA!!!

JULIE AND TAYLOR
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!

(CUT TO) Getting a shot of the full moon.

(CUT TO) Julie and Taylor soon make it toward the street, where they'd have to walk across to get to the chapel.

JULIE
Let's walk across this street, the Church will be right up the block from here...

(CUT TO) All is quiet, Julie trying to comfort Taylor, as they talk about taking a vacation after all this was over, not one sign of Grizzler, until they start to walk across the street, Grizzler is following right behind them, swaying his axe to see who dies first.

TAYLOR
Hey, Julie?

JULIE
Yeah?

TAYLOR
After all this...and after...if we ever see Tyler again...I'd like to take a vacation...

JULIE
I'd still like to see him french-kiss Stephen Geoffreys.

Julie and Taylor laugh weakly.

JULIE
But seriously...I'd join you...hell, I'll even pay for the trip...where would you want to go?

TAYLOR
Oh...I don't know...maybe..

(CUT TO) Suddenly, Julie stops and they look back to see if anyone was following them...nothing.


(CONTINUED) .55

TAYLOR
Is he still following us...

JULIE
I don't know...let's just keep moving...

TAYLOR
Yeah...

JULIE
So, the vacation...

(CUT TO) They then keep walking, talking about Myrtle Beach, South Carolina being their big get away.

TAYLOR
Yeah?

JULIE
Well, where would we go?

TAYLOR
I've always thought Myrtle Beach, South Carolina...ever since I went down there with my parents...Ooohh...my mom's gonna kill--

JULIE
Taylor..don't say that word right now...I'll tell your mom it was all my idea.

TAYLOR
Thanks...anyway...it's like a tropical paradise all over...arcades around the streets, good food...the amusement park is great too...

JULIE
I'd wish this was all a nightmare, I wish Tyler would just jump out and scare us and it would all be a stupid trick...after this...we'll plan that vacation...and stop that Grizzler freak from ever killing aga---!!!!

(CUT TO) Grizzler then comes up and strikes Julie from behind, and stabs her through the back of the head, her eyes and teeth popped and punched out, breaks her neck. (CUT TO) Taylor then screams and runs for her life as Grizzler breaks Julie's next to try and stab further into her head, before looking up at Taylor running away.

TAYLOR
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(CONTINUED) .56

(CUT TO) He takes the axe, Taylor's running, Grizzler wraps the chains around the handle of his axe, Taylor's running, Grizzler throws his axe and holds the chains as he flies the blade right toward Taylor's head, chops her head clean off with one swing of his chained axe, making her headless body fall down.

TAYLOR
AHHH----!!!!!!!!!!

SCENE 24: HAPPY HALLOWEEN FOR GRIZZLER / NIGHTTIME

INT. STREETS / NIGHT

Grizzler takes Taylor's head and looks at it before stabbing it onto his axe to hold it on there. (CUT TO) Grizzler takes the chains and ties Tyler, Julie and Taylor's bodies all tightly around each other. (CUT TO) Dragging the bodies with him as he laughs demonically, walking deep into the woods toward his house, endlessly repeating in his demonic voice: "HAPPY HALLOWEEN" before laughing each time.

GRIZZLER
Happy Halloween!!!!!! MUAHAHERHERHAAA!!!

INT. GRIZZLER'S HOME / NIGHT

Grizzler chops up the dead bodies he's collected into tiny pieces like candy. (CUT TO) Taking all the costumes and cloths and burning them into the fire. (CUT TO) Grizzler takes all the flesh in hand fulls and walks it all over to the satanic alter he made, laying the pieces down as he mumbled gibberish. (CUT TO) Grizzler takes off his mask and lays it aside. (CUT TO) Grizzler presses a "play" button on an old 80s boom box, playing creepy Halloween music. (CUT TO) We see the horrifying zombiefied face of Donald Grizzler as he starts taking the "candy" in his hands and chomping and eating them up.

THE END?

Toby
02-08-2009, 02:45 PM
Damn...I do need to do some grammar and spell checks, I think I might be missing some, but it's part of a screenwriter's curse...sorry for the double-post..

Thef13GUY
06-21-2009, 09:29 AM
hmmmm......... Interesting I guess

Darkgod
06-21-2009, 09:35 AM
BARRY
So this is where that crazy clown killer hillbilly retard lives?

what a first line

Thef13GUY
06-21-2009, 10:08 AM
Hi, My Name is Barry I like walks on a beach and getting raped by cats, lol, Just kidding to be honest its not a bad idea based of what I have read and what I have seen of the comic book.

Toby
06-21-2009, 09:36 PM
I'm thinking of rewriting this to make it into a bit of a one-hour film, or make it acceptably short, and I don't think kids today REALLY talk like Johnny and Reg...I think I should at least add one crime scene for Scrimm to give him a bit more character.

koolmike
06-21-2009, 09:40 PM
Nice.

Up to scene 18.

Toby
06-21-2009, 10:44 PM
:dunno: Oh please, oh please, oh please...tell me...is it bad?

koolmike
06-21-2009, 10:47 PM
I like it so far.

Toby
06-21-2009, 11:11 PM
Mhm, mhm...go on...

koolmike
06-22-2009, 12:01 AM
finish it later

Toby
06-22-2009, 12:57 AM
Doh!!

Toby
10-01-2009, 12:17 AM
Here's a rewritten version of my Grizzler script, I'm going to make it into a short film for Halloween, anyone want to play in it as a trick or treater? It'll be fun! Enjoy reading my script.

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NIGHT of the GRIZZLER
A Screenplay by Toby Johansen


INT. GRIZZLER'S WOODS / NIGHT
CHARACTERS NEEDED: GRIZZLER.

ALL BLACK. ROLLING CREDITS IN ANIMATED-LIKE TEXT.

CINEMA18 PRESENTS

A TOBY JOHANSEN FILM

WE SLOWLY FADE INTO THE SHOT.

We fade into a shot of the full October moon, hearing the creeps in the night glisten their sounds to fill the air. (CUT TO) (SME/SLOW MOTION EFFECT): We fade into a shot where we're the eyes of GRIZZLER, as he walks into across the field and through a pack of trees, hearing him grunt and chuckle a bit, as he looks for his next best batch of "Halloween candy", his demonic voice echoing and frightening through the night. GRIZZLER is the main monster of this whole horror world, a hulking monster who hunts for people in the October nights killing them and taking them back to his house to chop them up into pieces and eat them up like candy, he's tall, dead-white-skinned, ugly though wears a creepy clown mask he made himself, wears baggy blue overalls, and wields a big bloody axe.

GRIZZLER
MURHURHURHAHAHAHAHA!!...

WE SLOW FADE FROM ONE SCENE TO ANOTHER.

EXT. GRIZZLER'S HOME / NIGHT
CHARACTERS NEEDED: CRAT, BASH, GLUTTO, GRIZZLER.

Nottinghand, Ohio
October 27, 1986

We slowly fade into a wide shot of the Grizzler House, all dark and dead, and silent, unknown that GRIZZLER is waiting inside, the skies are dark with purple and blue darkness, with sounds of only the woods surrounding the place. (CUT TO) We see three punks; CRAT, BASH, and GLUTTO walking up toward the Grizzler House as they run with their paint cans, howling and acting crazy with some laughter before standing right in front of it, examining it. CRAT is the leader of the punk gang, tough ass with a green mo hawk. BASH is the right hand man, a cool african punk in the gang. GLUTTO is the fatso punk of the group, the big goon who just wants to destroy anything that's bigger than him.
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BASH
So this is where that crazy, clown-
killer, hillbilly-retard lives?

CRAT
Yep, the home of the Grizzler...

BASH
This place doesn't look that
scary, that legend must be bullshit..
they said it'd be scary...

GLUTTO
(Angrily)This place looks like shit...
and it's too big! I hate it when it's
too big!!!

CRAT
Alright, boys, let's paint a bitchin' Mona Lisa!

GLUTTO
(Loudly) WOOOOO!!! THIS COCKMONGER'S
GONNA EAT MY BOWL OF SHITBALLS!!!

(CUT TO) CRAT, BASH, and GLUTTO run around laughing hysterically and spray-painting all over the building. (CUT TO) GLUTTO then goes in starts spray painting inside of GRIZZLER'S house, before he then walks over toward GRIZZLER'S table, looking at some remains and scraps of victims that he cut up. (CUT TO) CRAT and BASH keep fooling around and finish spray painting the sides of the home of GRIZZLER's. (CUT TO) GLUTTO picks up a toe, a bit freaked out by it as he squeezes it and blood dribbles out of it, backing away.

GLUTTO
What the fuck!?

GLUTTO then looks over when he hears a strange sound coming from the wall behind him, a large pentagram that is slightly and dimly glowing scarlett red, preparing to recieve a soul. GLUTTO then sprays some paint onto it, but it just melts the paint away onto the floor. GLUTTO then hears a footstep behind him, it's GRIZZLER, GLUTTO then turns around and GRIZZLER chops his head off, but we never see GRIZZLER'S face. (CUT TO) CRAT finishes a cool painting of a colorful demon that sort of looks like GRIZZLER to him. CRAT then calls over to BASH to come look at his piece.

CRAT
(Loudly) HEY BASH!!
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(CUT TO) BASH is on the other side of the Grizzler house, painting "BASH IS CASH" on the wall, before long he hears CRAT calling him, looking over at his direction as soon as he hears CRAT call him.

CRAT
(Loudly) BASH!! HEY BASH!!

BASH then runs over toward CRAT'S side of the building, out of the shot. (CUT TO) BASH comes over to CRAT and CRAT shows him his piece, looking for some feedback, while BASH looks at the design on the wall that CRAT made, really admiring it.

BASH
Holy shit, man! THAT'S RAD!

CRAT
Yeah? Heheh...

BASH
What is it?

CRAT
It's Grizzler!!

BASH
Heh, looks like your mom!
(Laughs hysterically)

CRAT grows angry and punches BASH into his stomach to shut him up, BASH grabs his stomach for pain, but laughs under his breath.

CRAT
Hey, fuck you, dickbrain!...

BASH
Hehehehehehe...

(CUT TO) We see GRIZZLER bashing GLUTTO'S eyes in, making his head into a jack-o-lantern, cutting out his brain. (CUT TO) CRAT and BASH walk around looking at the Grizzler house, now about to claim it to be their pad from now on.

CRAT
Look at this! Look at our sweet
pad, man. It's so fuckin' A!

BASH then starts to wonder about GLUTTO not being with them.

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BASH
Where's Glutto?

CRAT
Fatass must be in the house
still, trying to scare us.

(CUT TO) BASH then spots something he's never seen before on the steps toward the doorway, and points it out for CRAT to see too, as they both look at the object sitting on the steps with fearful freak-out.

BASH
Crat, what's that?!

(CUT TO) We get a zoomed-up look at the stairs seeing that GLUTTO'S head has been made into a jack-o-lantern. (CUT TO) CRAT and BASH start to freak out a bit.

BASH
Holy sh--..oh man! You see what
he did to Glutto?!?! Oh my god!! We
shouldn't have came here, man!..I
don't like this, CRAT, I don't like
this at all!

CRAT
Shut up, Bash! Quit bitchin'!
Now, if we're gonna get out of
here alive, we need to make sure
the killer who ever did this to
Glutto doesn't find us first...
We'll run to the police station...
bring them down here and rip this
psycho's balls off!

BASH
I don't know, man, if Grizzler was
a ghost or some shit, man, he can
find us no matter where we hide! Like
walk-through-walls and shit, man!...

CRAT
That whole Grizzler story's bullshit!
Some copycat loser-freak is out here
right now, but I know if my legs would
be the first to go...that Grizzler
DOESN'T exist!!
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(CUT TO) Suddenly, GRIZZLER comes up from behind BASH, causing both BASH and CRAT to scream out of terror, CRAT backs away from BASH as GRIZZLER grabs him around the neck, nearly choking BASH. (CUT TO) CRAT too scared to help backs away and watches from a short distance. (CUT TO) GRIZZLER takes the axe of his into his right hand and chops it hard against BASH'S chest hard, gore and blood splashing out before his left hand grinds into BASH'S flesh and rips out his left ribcage and lung out, causing BASH to cough up blood and slowly die. (CUT TO) CRAT vomits a little from the trama, as he stands back from the scene, before he starts scampering away, trying to run for his life. (CUT TO) GRIZZLER pushes BASH aside, looking down at him, as we view up to get a shoulder-length shot of GRIZZLER'S head for the first time, as he turns his head around seeing CRAT get away. The masked face of the monster is the money shot. GRIZZLER then rushes after CRAT, out of the shot. (CUT TO) CRAT keeps running for his life, not looking back as he tries to scream for help, but of course he was in a dead wasteland, no one could hear him scream, he's done for.

CRAT
SHIT!! SHIT!! HELP!! SOMEBODY!!
ANYBODY!!!??? AHHHHH!!!!!

(CUT TO) CRAT runs along a path in the woods with a metal fence on his right, unable to get through, with GRIZZLER following right behind him. (CUT TO) CRAT tries to hurry his legs faster, seeing him wet himself. (CUT TO) Seeing CRAT run for his life scared. (CUT TO) As GRIZZLER gets closer toward CRAT he fades into the thin air like a ghost. (CUT TO) CRAT looks back, not seeing GRIZZLER coming for him as he then takes a little rest against the tree, trying to calm down, but nearly scared shitless, and he just couldn't believe what he had just saw. (CUT TO) CRAT starts to look around to where he could escape, but after looking all around him, the rest of the area was guarded by metal fences all around, he was trapped.

CRAT
(Breathing heavily) Shit!...Shit, there's
no way out!...We...we came in from here..
those fences weren't there before!...Shit!..

(CUT TO) CRAT then turns to his side and rests against his left. (CUT TO) But then, GRIZZLER reappears behind CRAT lifting up his axe toward him. (CUT TO) CRAT'S eyes open wide from hearing something behind him. (CUT TO) But before long, GRIZZLER smashes his axe into both of CRAT'S legs into the tree, gorily cutting them off instantly. (CUT TO) CRAT screams in terror and pain as he rotates on his fall, falling on his back to the ground, looking up at GRIZZLER screaming for his life. (CUT TO) GRIZZLER takes his axe and cuts into CRAT'S
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stomach, viciously ripping out his insides and throwing them against the metal fence. (CUT TO) We see the bloody guts thrown onto the fence, viciously. (CUT TO) GRIZZLER stands up on both of CRAT'S arms, hearing them crunch and breaking. (CUT TO) CRAT keeps screaming in his massive terrifying end, moving around like a rabid animal. (CUT TO) GRIZZLER raises up his axe and shoots it down toward CRAT'S face, out of the shot. (CUT TO) We view quickly onto CRAT'S face, before we cut.

(CUT TO) We cut to an animated title sequence, where lightening begins to strike, and GRIZZLER stabs his axe into CRAT'S face, gorey brains splattering out, and then GRIZZLER drags his body by his axe across the muddy green ground as he stomps them back to his home through the trail. Looking down at GRIZZLER'S footprint in the ground as he drags CRAT across it, letting his blood fill it up. We view over it as the blood and the mud start forming out the title:

ToBy JoHaNsEn's NIGHT OF THE GRIZZLER

FADE TO BLACK.

SCENE 2: JULIE LEAVES FOR TRICK-OR-TREATING

INT. JULIE'S HOUSE / AFTERNOON
CHARACTERS NEEDED: JULIE, CARRIE, TAYLOR, TYLER.

WE SLOWLY FADE INTO THE SHOT.

JULIE finishes decorating her jack-o-latern, and lays it on the table. JULIE is a young, playful little blond-haired sister who loves to try and have fun with her friends, TAYLOR and TYLER, and she's jealous of her sister CARRIE at times because of her figure, JULIE is wearing an Alice in Wonderland costume ready to go out tonight. (CUT TO) The doorbel rings, TYLER and TAYLOR have arrived, and as JULIE goes to answer it, CARRIE hugs her from behind reminding her of the curfew. CARRIE is the picky, playful big sister of JULIE, busty, buxum, long black-haired beauty with a teasing side to her, but is mature in her own way, CARRIE flashes a bit when hugging JULIE to the door, but buttons her shirt back up, she is wearing her cop uniform ready for her patrol.

CARRIE
Happy Halloween, lil' sis!

JULIE
Alright, alright, get off of me,
already, you bimbo...

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CARRIE
Hey, hey, mind your language,
young lady!

JULIE
Alright...I'm sorry, can
I please go now?

CARRIE
First...remember there's a
curfew tonight!

JULIE
Yeah, yeah, I hear you,
8 o'clock...

CARRIE
Sharp!

JULIE
I know!

JULIE pulls out of CARRIE'S cliches and answers the door. (CUT TO) JULIE opens the door, there stand TAYLOR and TYLER, smiling and excited, ready for Trick-or-Treating. TAYLOR is JULIE'S best friend, though she is what others would call her a "chicken heart" due to the fact she seems to get scared a lot, TAYLOR is wearing a black cat costume and carries her own trick or treat bag. TYLER is TAYLOR'S boyfriend who's JULIE'S good friend all the same, he's been known to be a teasing joker around this pals and likes to have fun, like JULIE, TYLER wears a big pink bloody bunny suit with a freakish skull mask.

TAYLOR
You ready, Jules!?

TYLER
Let's go Trick-or-Treating,
BUNNY STYLE!! AAAAHHHHAHAH!!

TYLER playfully gets behind TAYLOR, hugging her and playfully humps her from behind like a rabbit, before TAYLOR nudges her left fist and punches TYLER'S nuts in, but to no effect as TYLER pulls away laughing.

TAYLOR
Shove it, Rottentail!

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(CUT TO) JULIE laughs as she walks out with her friends, CARRIE spanks her playfully sending her off.

CARRIE
Have fun, you three! And don't do
anything I wouldn't...like staying
out too late!

(CUT TO) JULIE flips her sister off as they all walk, TYLER laughs, and TAYLOR chuckles. (CUT TO) CARRIE scoffs and shuts the door, though as she does we see GRIZZLER'S shadow rise across it.

EXT. JULIE'S STREET / AFTERNOON
CHARACTERS NEEDED: JULIE, TAYLOR, TYLER, CREEPY DUDE.

(CUT TO) Looking from behind a CREEPY DUDE who's taking out his garbage, the afternoon atmosphere is pumpkin orange all around, and darkening still, while JULIE, TAYLOR, and TYLER walk together along the street.

TAYLOR
I don't know why you have to
put so much hate on your sister...

JULIE
Taylor, you know me well enough
to know why...

TYLER
Yeah, one guy after another that
wanted to date Julie, was always
the next to want to take a grab
and suck on those titties of Carrie's
like a fruit bat! (Suckles at his
finger tips)

TAYLOR
(Annoyed with TYLER) Shut up! You're
hurting her feelings!

JULIE
It's okay, it cheers me up sometimes..
Besides, who needs a boyfriend when I
have you two?

TAYLOR and TYLER smile at each other warmly, thinking the same thing, and then TYLER then replies with a joke, while pointing over to CREEPY DUDE.
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TYLER
That creepy dude sure needs
one, THAT'S for sure!

They three all laugh. (CUT TO) The CREEPY DUDE looks over, sneering at them. CREEPY DUDE is the town's old story-teller, an old timer who has stories to warn the little kiddies of what dangers could happen to them, he has some dry dirty-looking tan coveralls on with an orange cap, his features look a little too creey and haunting to be considered normal, but he is, thinking about warning the little trick-or-treaters. (CUT TO) JULIE, TAYLOR, and TYLER calm down from their good laugh as they continue to walk and talk.

TAYLOR
What street are we going to go
trick-or-treating at anyway?

TYLER
I was thinking we'd go trick-or-treating
over at that Nottinghand Street up around the
Weenhollow Road up the street from Julie's
house.

TAYLOR
Yeah, I heard they have more houses
up there anyway.

JULIE
More houses means more candy.

TYLER
Exactly!

TAYLOR
How long are we staying out?

JULIE
Why, do you have a date?

TYLER
You know we're gonna be out all
night long until the sun comes up!

TAYLOR
Heck yeah, going on a candy spree!

TYLER
Heh, I get it, "killing spree".
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TAYLOR
Well duh, definitely a candy spree,
and then just go play some Halloween
tricks!

JULIE
If those Punk Tricksters
don't trick us first..

(CUT TO) Suddenly, the CREEPY DUDE pops out of nowhere to warm the three, causing TAYLOR to hold onto TYLER nearly screams from the sudden sight of him, TYLER holding TAYLOR but not threatened, JULIE stands back a bit.

CREEPY DUDE
You don't want to be staying out on
Halloween night, or any night in
October for that matter...

TYLER
Okay, Creepy Dude, why the hell wouldn't
we want to stay out on Halloween or any
October night?

CREEPY DUDE
That crazed killer is still on the
loose, you damned fool! And you're just
gonna go out trick-or-treating anyways!?
You kids have been on some serious smack
lately, haven't you? Everyone knows Donald
Grizzler's still at large an--!

(CUT TO) When JULIA hears this, she quickly remembers the story of GRIZZLER and decides to interrupt the CREEPY DUDE so she could tell the story instead to them.

JULIE
Okay, just stop! Can you please just
go away and leave us alone, you old fart?

TAYLOR
What's wrong, Julie, I'd like to know who
this Donald Grizzler is...

TYLER
Yeah, Julie, why so worried off?


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JULIE
I'll tell you guys the story later when
we get back... Thank you, Mr. Creepy Dude,
Happy Halloween to you sir..

(CUT TO) The CREEPY DUDE just watches them as JULIE, TYLER, and TAYLOR walk away.

CREEPY DUDE
Don't say I didn't warn you...you dumb kids
and your damn radio commercials...he'll
get'em! I know it in the marrow of my bones...
Grizzler'll get'em...

SCENE 3: DETECTIVE SCRIMM

INT. DETECTIVE SCRIMM'S OFFICE / AFTERNOON
CHARACTERS NEEDED: DETECTIVE SCRIMM, OFFICER REDFIELD.

(CUT TO) Seeing DETECTIVE SCRIMM'S office window, as it dims with darkness coming from the Halloween night outside that's beginning. (CUT TO) We see DETECTIVE SCRIMM at his desk, looking down at his "Grizzler" files, seeing photos of dead remains of victims: A witch woman's guts and leg left in her bloody car seat, and a little boy's severed foot in the ground, and another little boy's bloody mask. (CUT TO) DETECTIVE SCRIMM sighs very deeply at the the photos. DETECTIVE SCRIMM is an 70-year-old senior detective who has a sad past of his grandson being killed by GRIZZLER, and holds a heavy heart when he looks over the files of missing or presumed dead people, and he's a tough old man who takes his job seriously.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Every Hallo-fucking-ween...Damn it.

(CUT TO) OFFICER REDFIELD walks into DETECTIVE SCRIMM'S office, checking up on him to see how he's doing. OFFICER REDFIELD is an mexican-american officer dedicated to the Forest Mills Police department who is also a close friend to DETECTIVE SCRIMM, he knows what he seems to be going through and tends to try and cheer him up.

OFFICER REDFIELD
Hey, Scrimm?

(CUT TO) DETECTIVE SCRIMM looks over to OFFICER REDFIELD, a tad relieved for his arrival.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Oh, Redfield...Afternoon. How's the wife?
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REDFIELD
She's doing FINE, she's just
fine. Y'know, handing out candy
for the little trick-or-trea--

REDFIELD pauses, a tad embarrassed to even mention anything to DETECTIVE SCRIMM that has to do with Halloween, seeing as how the man hates the time of year. (CUT TO) But DETECTIVE SCRIMM forgives him mentally and just ignores the last part, only thinking about his wife.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Glad to hear she's doing alright.

(CUT TO) REDFIELD sits with DETECTIVE SCRIMM, a bit concerned that he's looking through some pretty vicious files.

REDFIELD
Detective? I know it's none of my business...
but maybe we should cool down from this case
JUST for a little bit, we'll go grab a bite to
eat and have a drink?

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
I've got a sandwich to tide me over...
Heh, heh, heh...but I'd like a drink!
...And yes....a patrol around town
would be much satisfying......maybe even
call up deputy Carrie to come join...

(CUT TO) Looking at the vulger files and photos of the GRIZZLER victims as DETECTIVE SCRIMM talks.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
It's just...I can't ever remember my dearest
grandson...not by much of the photos I have
of him at home...nor his school work he finished
and got spectacular grades on to make me
proud...These files...knowing how DREADFUL
they truelly are...are the only memory I have
of my grandson...William..

(CUT TO) DETECTIVE SCRIMM leans back in his chair taking a deep breath as he continues, REDFIELD starting to understand.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
So you see, Redfield, it's not JUST
the sympathy of those whom we lost already
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DETECTIVE SCRIMM
(CONT.) to this case...it's just puzzle pieces to
an old fart's memory of the only
family he had...


(CUT TO) REDFIELD looks at DETECTIVE SCRIMM seriously now. (CUT TO) DETECTIVE SCRIMM then leans forward placing the photos and files back away and places them into his desk to try and keep those passionate memories aside for what he has to do, especially for REDFIELD'S reaction to him.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
I'll put these away...I can't let
these memories put me out of my league now...
My grandson can come second...after my
job...(sigh)...I'll be a skinned-and-salted
dickbrain before backing out of this case!

(CUT TO) REDFIELD gestures a side of relief, believing that DETECTIVE SCRIMM solving this case and finding the bastard who killed these people will help him cope with his loss. REDFIELD then stands up. (CUT TO) REDFIELD stands up from the chair and begins walking out to get the drinks.

REDFIELD
Yeah, you need a beer!

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Redfield.

REDFIELD stops in his tracks and looks back to DETECTIVE SCRIMM to see what he wants. (CUT TO) DETECTIVE SCRIMM motions his right hand while taking out his sandwich and plastic knife to cut it.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Two beers and some vodka...

(CUT TO) REDFIELD looks at DETECTIVE SCRIMM, feeling a bit concerned as he crosses his arms to watch him cut his sandwich. (CUT TO) DETECTIVE SCRIMM takes the sandwich out of the wrapping and begins to cut it up, but the plastic knife stinks and won't cut a damn thing, he starts to get annoyed and begins chopping down at it.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Damn thing never cuts shit!!


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(CUT TO) DETECTIVE SCRIMM chops at the sandwich three more times, cutting right after the third chop as we cut over to GRIZZLER violently chopping up dead pieces of his victims.

SCENE 4: GRIZZLER'S CANDY

INT. GRIZZLER'S HOME / NIGHT
CHARACTERS NEEDED: GRIZZLER.

(CUT TO) We see GRIZZLER chopping up the missing victims and the punks he captured and murdered into bloody gory pieces of flesh cubes, shaping his "candy". (CUT TO) VE: We see the bloody pentagram on the wall as it slowly and fading glows, preparing to receive more souls for GRIZZLER. (CUT TO) GRIZZLER takes the pieces by handfuls and crunches and chews them up in his vicious monster jaws hungrily, eating it like candy. (CUT TO) GRIZZLER then slips on his mask. (CUT TO) He grabs his bloody axe. (CUT TO) The skies are darkening blue and purple once again with the clouds shrouding the town, the smell of burning leaves and a cold breeze, and excitement of All Hallows Eve, as GRIZZLER then stomps out of his house, embracing the night that he's always been waiting for year after year, laughing excitingly before running out to the woods to celebrate some "trick-or-treating" of his own.

GRIZZLER
MURRHURHURHURHURHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!...

EXT. GRIZZLER WOODS / DARK PARTS OF TOWN / DARK MOON IN THE SKY / NIGHT
CHARACTERS NEEDED: GRIZZLER.

WE SLOWLY FADE FROM ONE SCENE TO ANOTHER.

Getting different shots of dark locations that feel Halloween-like, hearing GRIZZLER'S footsteps and sounds and darkly-faded echoing demonic giggles throughout.

SCENE 5: THE STORY OF DONALD GRIZZLER / GRIZZLER'S HALLOWEEN MASSACRE

INT. NOTTINGHAND STREET / NIGHT
CHARACTERS NEEDED: TRICK-OR-TREATERS, PARENTS, JULIA, TAYLOR, TYLER, PUNK TRICK-OR-TREATERS, GRIZZLER.

WE FADE FROM ONE SCENE TO ANOTHER.

We're looking at a street where we see about 20 TRICK-OR-TREATERS walking around houses with their PARENTS trick-or-treating and having the fun time of their lives.
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(CUT TO) We find JULIE and TAYLOR with some other TRICK-OR-TREATERS trick-or-treating at one house before walking over to the next, both of them excited.

TAYLOR
This is so FUN! Can't believe
this year's become so much better!

JULIE
Yeah, last year it was sort of mellowed,
but it hasn't been ANYTHING like this..

TAYLOR
Were there more of those bible-bumblers
trying to get people to quit Halloween or
those razor-blades in apples, or the fear
of abduction or something, or what?

JULIE
No, I think everyone was on vacation
that time...I think...or maybe it's because
of some of those disappearances that've
been happening over time.

TAYLOR
Disappearances?

JULIE
You haven't heard? Crat and his
boys have been said missing...so have
those two boys I used to babysit, Johnny
and Reggie.

TAYLOR
Good ridance if you ask me..they
all were a bunch of pricks!

JULIE
(Chuckles) Can't argue with that!

Before JULIE and TAYLOR could make it to the next house they hear TYLER scream across the street and quickly look over to see what's doing on. (CUT TO) TYLER'S screaming and chasing after two little TRICK-OR-TREATERS as they run and scream from him.

TYLER
(Screaming) ARRRRRAAHHH!!!! GIMME
YOUR CANDY!!! AHAHAHAHAAA!!
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(CUT TO) TAYLOR and JULIE look at each other and giggle at TYLER'S trickery.

TAYLOR
Seems SOMEONE'S more crazy about
Halloween than we are! (Chuckles)

JULIE
Why? Aren't you having fun?

TAYLOR
Of course! Coming out here and
trick-or-treating...but I mean
just running around like Tyler?

JULIE
You have to love his energy.

TAYLOR
Heh, the energizer bunny...

JULIE
No, seriously, that should be
us, we should be doing something
like that!

TAYLOR
What? You want us to act like
assholes?

JULIE
(Laughs) Taylor! I know we're not little
kids anymore...but you have to admit...
Getting older shouldn't be how you
mature...it should be how you live it,
y'know? And Tyler's...

TAYLOR
Being an asshole!

JULIE
UGH!

JULIE playfully smacks TAYLOR with her trick-or-treat bag as they both laugh. (CUT TO) TYLER walks over to TAYLOR and JULIE, looking into his bucket as he walks, amazed he has gotten so much candy.


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JULIE
(To TAYLOR) You should've been
a witch this year!

TYLER
(Excited) I can't believe I've
gotten THIS much candy in one
whole night!!

TAYLOR and JULIE look into TYLER'S bucket, seeming a bit shocked.

TAYLOR
All of that!?

JULIE
Geez!

(CUT TO) TYLER looks at TAYLOR and JULIE wondering if they had any luck.

TYLER
What about you two?

(CUT TO) TAYLOR and JULIE secretly look into their bags, not seeming to have as much as TYLER, disappointment grows on their faces and they sigh.

TYLER
Any luck?

TAYLOR AND JULIE
(Give the look and sigh, shaking
their heads a bit)

(CUT TO) TYLER smiles and slowly wraps his arms around both JULIE AND TAYLOR, turning them around to start walking up toward the next street, trying to cheer them up.

TYLER
Hey...Girls, don't worry! We still
have the next street to go to! And
we've known that lace so well to
have bath tubs full of candy! Come
on..cheer up!...And...what was with
all this talk of me being an asshole?



.18 © 2009 TOBY JOHANSEN. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.
(CUT TO) As JULIE and TAYLOR giggle a bit realizing TYLER somehow over-heard them, a PUNK TRICK-OR-TREATER KID runs out from behind them and he throws an egg at TYLER, causing TYLER to get angry at him and tries to go after him, but the PUNK TRICK-OR-TREATER KID runs away. JULIE and TAYLOR try to hold him back from beating on a kid. The PUNK TRICK-OR-TREATER KID is part of a little punk group of about three others who're about to cause more havoc on Halloween, he wears a full black and white skeleton costume with a hood mask.

TYLER
Hey! You little bastard!!

JULIE
Tyler!

TAYLOR
No, stop it! He's just a
stupid punk trick-or-treater...

(CUT TO) TYLER then calms down and he turns around with JULIE and TAYLOR as they three start walking down the street, TYLER a little angry that he'd been tricked out of all the years of him being the trickster.

TYLER
Shit-eating little jerk-off...

(CUT TO) We slowly view over from TYLER, JULIE, and TAYLOR as they keep walking along the street and stop to where we see the PUNK TRICK-OR-TREATER KID rush up toward his friends, as they pair up and prepare to do another prank on someone. VE: We then see GRIZZLER ghostly appear into the shot facing directly toward them, gripping his axe tightly. (CUT TO) We follow JULIE, TYLER as they walk and talk, TYLER and TAYLOR feeling a bit down that Halloween's already beginning to have its night.

TYLER
Man, I hate it when Halloween's almost over..

TAYLOR
Yeah, tell me about it.

TYLER
And hey, Julie, why didn't you want
that Creepy Dude back at your street
to tell us about this Donald Grizzle-Grizzler
guy? Was he your famous relative or
something? Or your dad?
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TAYLOR
Shut up, Tyler! That wasn't funny...

JULIE
No...he was just some scary folk tale
my Grandmother told me about when I went
to visit her two years ago...Now it seems
the whole town is in on it...

TAYLOR
But why?

JULIE
They get their kicks, saying if you
stay out too late on Halloween night
he'll come and get you...Though, I think
it explains some of the disappearances
around here...

TYLER
Hey, I like this story so far...
tell us MORE about it!

TAYLOR
Yeah, go for it, girlfriend!

JULIE
Well...alright, but just because we
need some more Halloween spirit to cheer
us up..

TYLER
Definitely.

TAYLOR
Yeah!

(CUT TO) We see all sorts of flash backs as JULIE tells the story, viewing over to her left as we see a shot of GRIZZLER chewing an eye-ball before we get a full shot of GRIZZLER'S house, being out in the creepy woods.

EXT. GRIZZLER'S HOME / AFTERNOON
CHARACTERS NEEDED: JULIE (NARRATION), DONALD GRIZZLER, FATHER GRIZZLER.

JULIE
It was about four years ago, these two
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JULIE
(CONT.) hillbillies lived in the woods outside
of our town of Nottinghand..Donald Grizzler
and his father Father Grizzler...the mom
died long ago from some sickness..so it
was Donald and his dad..

(CUT TO) DONALD GRIZZLER then finishes painting his clown mask and then puts it on and tries to scare himself in the mirror.

JULIE
And Donald's dad was trying to not let
their back-woods heritage slip away...but
Donald just loved only one of our society's
beloved holidays...Halloween....He loved
it so much he made his own clown mask out
of wood, paint, and some straps to hold on
his head...and before you know it he slips
it on every night and tries to scare himself
when he was looking into his bedroom mirror..

EXT. STREETS / NIGHT
CHARACTERS NEEDED: JULIE, TAYLOR, TYLER.

(CUT TO) JULIE, TAYLOR, TYLER are sitting behind a fence together in a story circle, as JULIE looking at TYLER and TAYLOR as if trying to make her expression a bit chilling as she tells the story.

JULIE
And when Father Grizzler found out about
his little Don-Boy breaking the heritage
with his Halloween nonsense...he beat Donald
over the head about twenty-three times to
get it all out of his mind...

EXT. GRIZZLER'S HOME / NIGHT
CHARACTERS NEEDED: FATHER GRIZZLER, GRIZZLER, JULIE (NARRATION).

(CUT TO) Seeing FATHER GRIZZLER pouring kerosene all over DONALD GRIZZLER while he's in bed, before leaving the room and putting the cap back onto the bottle of kerosene.

JULIE
But Donald Grizzler still loved Halloween
in secret, regardless how many beatings he
got...but his father still knew about his
Halloween lust, and so Father Grizzler poured
a bunch of kerosene all over Donald's body
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JULIE
(CONT.) while he was a sleep in his bed...thinking
it'll get them Halloween ideas out of Donald's
head...

GRIZZLER'S WOODS / AFTERNOON
CHARACTERS NEEDED: DONALD GRIZZLER, FATHER GRIZZLER, JULIE (NARRATION).

(CUT TO) DONALD GRIZZLER and FATHER GRIZZLER walk out in the woods to hunt, DONALD GRIZZLER carrying his axe as FATHER GRIZZLER carries his pipe and his rifle.

JULIE
The next morning...Donald and his dad go
out for some hunting in the woods...Grizzler
carrying his axe...and his daddy carrying a
rifle and a pipe..

(CUT TO) FATHER GRIZZLER takes out his match and lits it to puff up his pipe.

JULIE
Father Grizzler lights up his pipe...

(CUT TO) FATHER GRIZZLER then flicks the lit match over his right shoulder toward Donald.

JULIE
And then he flicks his match at Donald....

EXT. STREETS / NIGHT
CHARACTERS NEEDED: JULIE, TAYLOR, TYLER.

(CUT TO) JULIE looking at TAYLOR and TYLER to see if they're freaking out yet, and then makes them jump as she continues making her voice louder and frightful.

JULIE
Burning him alive!

EXT. GRIZZLER'S WOODS / AFTERNOON
CHARACTERS NEEDED: GRIZZLER, FATHER GRIZZLER, JULIE (NARRATION).

(CUT TO) Seeing GRIZZLER'S burning hand reaching out to FATHER GRIZZLER, screaming in pain as his father just looks back at him.


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GRIZZLER
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EXT. GRIZZLER'S HOME / AFTERNOON
CHARACTERS NEEDED: GRIZZLER, JULIE (NARRATION).

(CUT TO) GRIZZLER is in the house, finishing painting the wall with red paint in his hands, a pentagram, and begins to pray to it to ask the devil to help him, seeing the pentagram slowly glow blood red.

JULIE
Luckily, Donald survived, but was
badly burned, his right eye was melted
off along with his nose, his lips, his
chin almost, his right ear was all melted
off...Donald then made a small pentagram
on his wall making a ritual to speak to
the Devil, to help him get revenge on his
dad so he can celebrate Halloween forever....
and the Devil told Donald to go get his
father, cut him up with his own axe into
tiny pieces and eat him...

EXT. STREETS / NIGHT
CHARACTERS NEEDED: JULIE, TAYLOR, TYLER.

(CUT TO) JULIE looking at TYLER and TAYLOR.

JULIE
If Donald Grizzler did this, not
only would the corpse he ate taste like
candy, but he would be given the powers
of Hell to celebrate Halloween forever...
but he would only be able to come out in
the month of October, and he would have
to kill more victims too and chop them up
and eat them up like candy aswell to keep
the deal tied with the Devil..

EXT. GRIZZLER'S HOME / AFTERNOON
CHARACTERS NEEDED: GRIZZLER, FATHER GRIZZLER, JULIE (NARRATION).

(CUT TO) GRIZZLER puts on his clown mask and looks over to his axe, realizing it'll be his signature weapon for his deed from now on. (CUT TO) GRIZZLER sneaks up behind FATHER GRIZZLER while FATHER GRIZZLER is looking in his truck for a wrench, and GRIZZLER lifts up his axe, and as FATHER GRIZZLER turns around, GRIZZLER smashes the axe into his head, brains splattering all over the place.
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JULIE
And so Donald puts on his clown mask,
taking his axe and goes outside to see
Father Grizzler while he's looking for
a wrench in his truck, and when Grizzler's
standing behind him...raising his axe....
Father Grizzler turns around and then WHAM!!!
Grizzler chops his axe right into his dad's
face..brains and blood going everywhere!

(CUT TO) GRIZZLER drags FATHER GRIZZLER over to the table, slapping him onto the table, and chops his axe everywhere, hacking his father's body up with blood and gore going everywhere, GRIZZLER cutting up FATHER GRIZZLER'S hand into pieces.

JULIE
Donald then drags his father's corpse
back into the house and chops his father
into pieces just as the Devil told him
to...hacking him up limb-from-limb...

(CUT TO) Donald sits down putting his clown mask to his side, taking the piles-and-pieces of meat in his hands and chews them up and eats them into his jaws, never seeing his face. (CUT TO) Now only his mouth crunching up the meat before cutting over to TYLER'S mouth.

JULIE
He takes all the pieces of meat and
crunches them down...and as the Devil
said...they DID taste like candy.

EXT. STREETS / NIGHT
CHARACTERS NEEDED: JULIE, TAYLOR, TYLER.

(CUT TO) Seeing TYLER'S mouth crunch onto a chocolate bar, enjoying the story so far. (CUT TO) TYLER sits up with TAYLOR at his side holding him a bit, but she looks a bit freaked out about the story so far.

TYLER
Heheh, all this talk about eating
chopped-up corpses and candy is making
me hungry.

TAYLOR
Ewww!!!


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(CUT TO) JULIE enjoying their likeness of the story, as she then thinks of a local named MR. ROMERO, thinking putting him in the story would make it more fun.

JULIE
Hey, you guys remember what
happened to Mr. Romero?

TYLER
Yeah, they said he died
of a heart attack..

TAYLOR
That was only like
five days ago..

JULIE
Well...I think I know what
really happened to him...

TAYLOR
What do you mean?

JULIE
Well...they said he was
cutting up wood, wasn't he?

TYLER
Yeah, because it always
gets cold in October.

JULIE
That's right...he was cutting
up some wood...and he only had
two more left before he'd take
them in for the fire...but that
was when Grizzler came up behind
him, hovering his axe over his
head...ready to smash it in his
head...until....he decides to drop
the axe...

TYLER
HA! That was lame...What did
he do next? Dress up into a ballet
outfit and played with his bells?


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JULIE
No!....

EXT. ROMERO'S BACKYARD / AFTERNOON
CHARACTERS NEEDED: GRIZZLER, MR. ROMERO, JULIE (NARRATION), TYLER (VOICE).

(CUT TO) Seeing GRIZZLER ripping off MR. ROMERO'S arms off in a bloody/gory fashion, MR. ROMERO screaming in sharp pain.

JULIE
He took Mr. Romero's arms
and ripped them off!!

TYLER
Cool!

(CUT TO) GRIZZLER then takes his axe and slashes it across MR. ROMERO'S belly open, his guts pouring all over his lap, as GRIZZLER then pulls them out and T'Ps them onto a tree.

JULIE
Grizzler then took his axe and slashes
it across Mr. Romero's stomach, pouring
his guts out...before taking a handful
and ripping them out and throws them onto
a tree close by, T'Ping it.

TYLER
Now THAT'S creative.

(CUT TO) GRIZZLER then grabs MR. ROMERO around his neck, taking his axe and smashes it across his head and face, blasting the remains out, blood and gore going everywhere.

JULIE
Before he then takes Mr. Romero by
the neck and slashes his brains out
with one swing of his axe!

EXT. STREETS / NIGHT ((ADD IN A PART WITH GRIZZLER))
CHARACTERS NEEDED: JULIE, TAYLOR, TYLER.

(CUT TO) TAYLOR gets more and more creeped out by the end of the story, TYLER likes it a lot so far, JULIE just has a ball as she continues to tell the story.


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TAYLOR
That's just too creepy! It was
only a heart attack!

TYLER
Actually, my buddies were at
the crime scene, they said there
was no body, just blood and guts
all over the place.

JULIE
And all that was left was
Mr. Romero's hatchet and the
two logs he never got to cut...

WE SLOW FADE FROM ONE SCENE TO ANOTHER.

EXT. NOTTINGHAND STREET / NIGHT
CHARACTERS NEEDED: GRIZZLER, PUNK TRICK-OR-TREATER #1, PUNK TRICK-OR-TREATER #2, PUNK TRICK-OR-TREATER KID, LITTLE WITCH TRICK-OR-TREATER, DADDY, LITTLE GOBLIN TRICK-OR-TREATER, LITTLE VAMPIRE TRICK-OR-TREATER, MOTHER AND PUMPKIN BABY, TEEN TRICK-OR-TREATER, JULIE (NARRATION).

We go into numberous dramatic, artistic visual shots of GRIZZLER going around and killing off the PUNK TRICK-OR-TREATERS, TRICK-OR-TREATERS, and the PARENTS in the most vicious and grizzly of ways, while JULIE is telling the rest of the story.

A punk trick-or-treater just causing some havoc before he gets killed by GRIZZLER, before GRIZZLER punches through his stomach from behind, before he chops his axe up into his face and his right shoulder about five times before he's ripped in half. (CUT TO) A punk trick-or-treater just causing some havoc before he gets killed by GRIZZLER, as he fights GRIZZLER with a long chain he had, GRIZZLER axes his groin, grinds up into his belly, and rips out his guts and throws them onto a tree, before he takes his chain and smashes the punk's face off with one hard swing of his axe. (CUT TO) A punk kid trick-or-treater just causing some havoc before he gets killed by GRIZZLER, as he runs for his life screaming, GRIZZLER slam-dunk-chops his right leg off, then chops and locks his axe into the PUNK TRICK-OR-TREATER KID'S neck, and then picks him up by his left hip and climatically and gorifyingly rips him apart in two, blood and gore fantastica flying from the money shot.

JULIE
Of course, Mr. Romero wasn't the only
victim to fill Grizzler's belly...Grizzler would
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JULIE
(CONT.) go out and savagely murder and scare the
living hell out of the children and anyone else
he could catch up to...Chopping and cutting
them with his axe, and is said to be so strong
he could rip two people apart at once...and
would take the bodies back to his house to
chop and eat them up like candy as he did
his daddy and Mr. Romero...having a frightfully
fantastic trick-or-treating of his very own...!

(CUT TO) A little witch-dressed trick-or-treater who suddenly comes across GRIZZLER, as she runs away from GRIZZLER she gets her head chopped clean off while she runs away, and her head is made into a jack-o-lantern. (CUT TO) The father of the Little Witch Trick-or-Treater, running over to try and stop GRIZZLER, when he's runing toward GRIZZLER, GRIZZLER turns and slashes his left arm off, before slashing him across his face, causing him to break out his jaw and bleed rapidly. (CUT TO) A little goblin-dressed trick-or-treater who suddenly comes across GRIZZLER, as the LITTLE GOBLIN TRICK-OR-TREATER and the LITTLE VAMPIRE TRICK-OR-TREATER just look up in horror when GRIZZLER walks toward them, GRIZZLER punches the LITTLE VAMPIRE TRICK-OR-TREATER to his side and then chops the LITTLE GOBLIN TRICK-OR-TREATER'S head in half instantly. (CUT TO) A little vamire-dressed trick-or-treater who suddenly comes across GRIZZLER, as the LITTLE VAMPIRE TRICK-OR-TREATER tries to crawl away, GRIZZLER takes his axe and slashes underneath the boy's chin taking his head completely off. (CUT TO) Just a mother and her baby running across GRIZZLER'S path who become unfortunate, the MOTHER gets chopped several times in the neck, dropping her BABY, before she is completely decapitated, and GRIZZLER crushes the BABY, mumbling a little "pumpkin pie" reference. (CUT TO) A teen trick-or-treater that stabs GRIZZLER with a knife at first, but when GRIZZLER bleeds onto his hand it's like purple thick slime that smells of karacene, so he then takes a stray paint can and a match to set him on fire, GRIZZLER vomits his karacene blood goop all over the TEEN TRICK-OR-TREATER, with the lighter lit itsets the guy on fire, before GRIZZLER chops his head in half.

EXT. SCRIMM'S OFFICE / NIGHT
CHARACTERS NEEDED: DETECTIVE SCRIMM, OFFICER REDFIELD.

(CUT TO) DETECTIVE SCRIMM and OFFICER REDFIELD are chuckling as they take a drink of their vodka, before long, DETECTIVE SCRIMM'S phone starts to ring and he answers it immediately.



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DETECTIVE SCRIMM
(Answers the phone heartily at first) Scrimm here,
What's--(Expression and voice change drastically to
concern) What!? Where!?...Sweet Jesus, I'll be right
there!

(CUT TO) DETECTIVE SCRIMM quickly hangs up the phone and stands up, OFFICER REDFIELD follows along concerned about the phone call, as SCRIMM turns to him.

OFFICER REDFIELD
What was that?

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
No time to talk, get the car ready!

OFFICER REDFIELD
Scrimm, don't you think--?

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
(Loudly) Redfield, go get the damn car
started!!

OFFICER REDFIELD rushes out of the office to go start the car. (CUT TO) DETECTIVE SCRIMM picks up the phone and dials CARRIE'S number.

EXT. JULIE'S HOUSE / NIGHT
CHARACTERS NEEDED: CARRIE (DEAD), DETECTIVE SCRIMM (VOICE).

(CUT TO) We're moving around in JULIE'S house, starting from the phone and the answering machine as DETECTIVE SCRIMM tries to contact CARRIE through a message, we start to see grizzly-looking trail of blood and following remains of CARRIE inside the house, and we follow it leading outside where we see a remaining torso of CARRIE'S body had been stumped up onto a wooden pike by GRIZZLER, torn apart and stuffed with straw, made into a human scarecrow.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Carrie? Carrie! This is Scrimm! Carrie? Answer
the phone, Carrie, please! Carrie! Listen, Redfield
and I need you to come meet up with us on Nottinghand
Street...If you get this message you have to come
QUICKLY! (Hangs up)

SCENE 6: GRIZZLER'S LAST BATCH

INT. STREETS / NIGHT
CHARACTERS NEEDED: JULIE, TAYLOR, TYLER, GRIZZLER.
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(CUT TO) TAYLOR gets too creeped out, TYLER tries to comfort her, while JULIE'S having her laugh, before the three of them stand up and begin walking, JULIE walking ahead of them.

TYLER
Heh, I think you overdid it, Julie...

JULIE
Good!

TAYLOR
Yeah, it's getting too dark, Tyler,
can we go home now?

JULIE
Hah, I can't believe you guys bought
that stupid legend...heheheh...
pot-smokers..

TAYLOR
Julie! Wait!

(CUT TO) VE: As JULIE, TAYLOR, and TYLER walk and talk together, we see GRIZZLER reappear out of thin air as he follows them from behind them, motioning his axe around to see which one he should kill first, before TYLER notices his trick-or-treat bucket has gone missing and tells JULIE and TAYLOR he's going back to the spot they were just sitting at to look for it.

JULIE
Seriously, you two can really
take a lot of things TOO seriously...
I mean, really, a big backwoods
retarded hulk wearing overalls and
a clown mask to axe up his victims?
COME ON!

TAYLOR
Just shut up, Julie...You never
know what's out there...

TYLER
(Desperately trying to scare TAYLOR) OoOoooohh...
Taylor...Grizzler's gonna get you! And drag
you straight down to hell!!...In his belly!!
(Screaming) AHHHAHAHAHAHAA!!!!


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TAYLOR
(Nudges TYLER to get him
to shut up) Shut up, Tyler!!
Damn it!

JULIE
(Chuckles)

TYLER
(Chuckles, before he realizes
his trick-or-treat bucket is
missing) Oh, damn, hey, I think
I dropped my pumpkin bucket...

(CUT TO) VE: TYLER turns around to run back to find his candy bucket, at the same time GRIZZLER vanishes into thin air, TYLER never noticing, TAYLOR wanting TYLER to forget about it, concerned for him.

TAYLOR
Tyler! Wait! Forget about it...
I don't want you to get lost in
the neighborhood at this time of
night...

(CUT TO) TYLER turns back to tell JULIE and TAYLOR to go on without him and that he'll catch up.

TYLER
You girls go on ahead.
I need to find my candy
bucket!

JULIE
Alright! But remember...
Grizzler's out tonight! Don't
get chopped!

TYLER then runs out into the darkness. (CUT TO) JULIE notices TAYLOR is looking back, worried about TYLER, before she tickle-tags her, making TAYLOR jump as they both chuckle and walk away.

JULIE
URAAH!! (Giggles)

TAYLOR
Ahhh! (Giggles)


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JULIE
He'll be okay, come on!

TAYLOR
Ugh!?...You're too forceful
sometimes...

JULIE
You love it...

(CUT TO) TYLER returns to the spot and finds his trick-or-treat bucket, as he excitingly picks it up to have a few pieces, before he looks into it stunned that it's missing, all the candy spreeing, wasted, but while he's looking into it, GRIZZLER gets behind him, gripping his axe tightly.

TYLER
There you are, you sucker!
(Looking into the bucket,
angered and massively shocked)
What the FU--!? Where the hell's
my candy!?!??!!

(CUT TO) Suddenly, TYLER hears a loud burp come out from behind him, hinting GRIZZLER had eaten all the candy in the bucket and or his victims he just recently killed, TYLER is flooded with fear as he slowly moves his eyes around his right, turning his head to see who or what is behind him.

GRIZZLER
URRRPP!!!

(CUT TO) GRIZZLER purposely drops his axe, lifting his hands up toward TYLER. (CUT TO) TYLER looks back, mouth dropped open, his eyes nearly popped out, frightened out of his to see GRIZZLER standing there behind him, GRIZZLER begins to giggle at his victim.

GRIZZLER
HURHURHEHHEH!...

(CUT TO) TYLER then turns back and quickly scrambles to feet screaming to get away, while GRIZZLER reaches over to get him, chuckling while he does it.

TYLER
CHRIST! HE'S REAL!!!


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GRIZZLER
HURHURHAHAHAHEH!!!

(CUT TO) GRIZZLER pulls up TYLER to him and grabbing his head and slowly begins crushing it in his palms, TYLER looking back into GRIZZLER'S darkened eye in terror at his demise as he grabs hold of GRIZZLER'S hands to get out of his grip and to keep him from crushing his throat and neck, but his eyes then pop out of his sockets slowly, his brains and blood shooting out the back of his head and letting go as he dies, and then GRIZZLER bends and brakes his neck ripping TYLER'S head to his shoulders.

TYLER
ACKLLL!!?!!

GRIZZLER
ERRRRRRRRRGGGG...(While breaking his
head off) URRGG!!

(CUT TO) We cut to JULIE and TAYLOR as they keep walking together and talking about TYLER.

TAYLOR
Tyler's been away for a little
longer than I thought...

JULIE
Taylor, it's TYLER we're talking
about here...

Suddenly, the two girls hear GRIZZLER'S echoing demonic laughter behind them, JULIE tries to ignore it as TAYLOR gets startled and looks back behind them to see where it came from, hoping TYLER'S alright.

GRIZZLER
....MurhurhurhahAHAHA!!

TAYLOR
Julie?

JULIE
What?

TAYLOR
You heard that, right?


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JULIE
(Trying to scare TAYLOR) Yeah...
don't know who that could be...!

TAYLOR
Stop it, Julie, I'm serious...

GRIZZLER
....MurhurhurhahAHAHA!!

TAYLOR
It sounds like it's getting
closer...Julie, what IS THAT?!

JULIE
It could be Grizzler...they say
you know when Grizzler's coming
to get you when you hear his demonic
laughter echoing from the woods...
Getting closer and closer...and
before you know it!

TAYLOR
Shut up!! Stop scaring me!

JULIE
Oh, Taylor, grow up, I told you
it was just a story...

(CUT TO) VE: TAYLOR tries to calm down, as we see GRIZZLER suddenly appear behind them, rushing up toward JULIE, raising his axe, TAYLOR thinking it's TYLER trying to scare them.

TAYLOR
You think TY is trying to scare us?

JULIE
Totally, but sadly he can only
scare his--!

(CUT TO) GRIZZLER then comes up and strikes JULIE from behind, and stabs her through the back of the head, her eyes and teeth popped and punched out, breaks her neck. (CUT TO) TAYLOR then screams and runs for her life as GRIZZLER breaks JULIE'S next to try and stab further into her head, before looking up at TAYLOR running away.

TAYLOR
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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(CUT TO) He takes the axe, TAYLOR'S running, GRIZZLER wraps the chain he took from the PUNK TRICK-OR-TREATER around the handle of his axe, TAYLOR'S running, GRIZZLER throws his axe and holds the chains as he flies the blade right toward TAYLOR'S head, chops her head clean off with one swing of his chained axe, making her headless body fall down.

TAYLOR
AHHH----!!!!!!!!!!

SCENE 7: GRIZZLER'S HALLOWEEN

INT. NOTTINGHAM STREET / NIGHT
CHARACTERS NEEDED: DETECTIVE SCRIMM, OFFICER REDFIELD.

(CUT TO) Everything is in slow motion, as we get numerous shots of some Halloween decorations all blood spattered from GRIZZLER'S carnage, lights from the flickering sirens of police cars start to fill up the street. (CUT TO) DETECTIVE SCRIMM looks around himself at the street, as we see more lights from the police sirens behind him flicker about, he's deeply gashed of what hope he had of saving the street from being incredibly massacred, looking around his eyes sorrowful and his mouth dropped open in complete shock and devastation at the sight. (CUT TO) We look from behind DETECTIVE SCRIMM as he's surrounded by piles and decorations-worth of gorifying remains of the victims, organs, legs, arms, heads. (CUT TO) DETECTIVE SCRIMM then slowly looks down at the spot before him, this had really turned his soul for the worse as he slowly begins to fall to his knees. (CUT TO) DETECTIVE SCRIMM falls to his knees as he looks at the scene in front of him, shocked to the limit.

DETECTIVE SCRIMM
Sweet Jesus...

(CUT TO) While DETECTIVE SCRIMM stands there, OFFICER REDFIELD quickly comes to his aid, holding his shoulders and lightly shaking him to snap out of his trance.

OFFICER REDFIELD
Scrimm? Scrimm! Hey, Scrimm! Come
on, snap out of it! Scrimm!

(CUT TO) We slowly view over from along the left and we stop and view into the shot with the two severed and jack-o-lanterned heads of the LITTLE WITCH TRICK-OR-TREATER and the LITTLE VAMPIRE TRICK-OR-TREATER, with candles lit up beneath their flesh like real jack-o-lantern.

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OFFICER REDFIELD
Scrimm! Scrimm!

EXT. STREETS / NIGHT
CHARACTERS NEEDED: GRIZZLER, JULIE (DEAD), TAYLOR (DEAD), TYLER (DEAD).

GRIZZLER takes TAYLOR'S head and looks at it before stabbing it onto his axe to hold it on there. (CUT TO) GRIZZLER takes the chains and ties TYLER, JULIE and TAYLOR'S bodies all tightly around each other. (CUT TO) Dragging the bodies with him as he laughs demoniacally, walking deep into the woods toward his house, endlessly repeating in his demonic voice: "HAPPY HALLOWEEN" before laughing each time.

GRIZZLER
Happy Halloween!!!!!! MUAHAHERHERHAAA!!!

EXT. GRIZZLER'S HOME / NIGHT
CHARACTERS NEEDED: GRIZZLER.

WE SLOW FADE FROM ONE SCENE TO ANOTHER.

We get a full shot of GRIZZLER'S house, viewing around it slowly, as GRIZZLER walks inside with what he caught. (CUT TO) GRIZZLER chops up the dead bodies he's collected into tiny pieces like candy. (CUT TO) Taking all the costumes and cloths and burning them into the fire. (CUT TO) GRIZZLER takes all the flesh in hand fulls and walks it all over to the satanic alter he made as it glows faded red and stops glowing as he sits down on the floor, laying the pieces down in front of him. (CUT TO) GRIZZLER takes off his mask and lays it aside. (CUT TO) GRIZZLER presses a "play" button on an old 80s boom box, playing creepy Halloween music. (CUT TO) We see the horrifying zombiefied face of Donald GRIZZLER as he starts taking the "candy" in his hands and chomping and eating them up.

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THE END?

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