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H78
02-10-2009, 05:06 PM
“Relax,” mother laughed. “It’s only a movie.”

As hard as it was to make it through the first 40 minutes of A Nightmare on Elm Street, my insatiable curiosity forced me to keep my eyes open. For some reason, even at my tender, easily-influenced age, I wanted to see more of what the demented killer had in store for the movie’s groggy, sleepless teenagers.

“I know, mom,” I said. “I’m not too scared. It’s only a movie and he’s only wearing makeup.”

“You got it, kiddo,” she told me.

That Friday night was no different than most other Friday nights. My mother, still naive at 32, never saw the problem in letting her eight-year-old son watch horror films. Whenever I’d get scared she’d always say the same thing – it’s just a movie.

Over time, I came to believe what she told me. While a certain part of me wanted to believe that Freddy Kruger was invading the homes of my teenage neighbors, I never truly believed it was happening. Horror was a just a genre of movies, not a glimpse into reality.

When it wasn’t A Nightmare on Elm Street, it was Halloween. If not Halloween, it was Hellraiser, or The Texas Chainsaw Massacre, or Friday the 13th. Every weekend saw a new villain chasing new teenagers until a heroine brought an end to all the madness. The more I watched, the less impressed I became with the formula. That is, until one Friday night at the video store, mother told me I could pick any movie I wanted.

“Psycho?” she asked. “That movie’s really old. It’s in black-and-white you know. Are you sure you want to rent that? You should get this one, Black Christmas.”

I don’t know what drew my attention to the cardboard box containing the antiquated VHS tape, but something about the woman screaming and the gray mansion entranced me.

“No, I want to get this one. I watch The Munsters, and that’s in black-and-white. Maybe I’ll like this one too.”

“Well, OK I suppose. No falling asleep though,” she warned.

That night was unlike any of the previous Friday nights. Mother dozed off minutes into the film but I couldn’t keep my eyes off of the grainy, vintage display. Something seemed familiar about the film, something unlike the other horror films we’d rented in weeks past.

This time, there weren’t any unstoppable killing machines, guys behind masks, or demons from another world. There was just what appeared to be a regular guy, Norman, who ended up doing things to people that, for once, seemed real.

When people hit Norman, he fell to the ground, unlike Jason or Pinhead. I could see the pain in Norman’s face, unlike Freddy or Michael. Yet, despite his humanistic qualities, he still killed people. I had a hard time convincing myself that this could only be make-believe, but I still tried.

“It’s just a movie,” I reminded myself. “It’s just a movie…it’s all fake, just like the others.”

The more I tried to convince myself that what I was seeing wasn’t possible, the harder it became to actually believe it. Norman was just a normal person, but he still did horrible things to people, just like all the monsters from the other movies. Terrified, I tried to wake mother.

“Come on, kiddo, I’m tired. Shut the movie off if you’re scared. Remember, it’s all fake,” she whispered.

For once, I didn’t believe her. Norman seemed as real as I was; there was no way everything he did couldn’t happen in real life…

“And that’s when you killed her?” Dr. Petrakis asked. “That’s when you decided killing her was the only way to get your sure answer?”

“I thought it was all fake but I needed to know it was all fake…”

“And the way you looked for an answer was to bludgeon your mother with a butcher knife?” Dr. Petrakis interrupted. “You’ve kept this reason, this secret, for 10 years. Is this real to you...this conversation? Is your incarceration real?”

“I had to know,” I said. “She always told me that what happened in the movies wasn’t real and that it couldn’t happen in real life. I did what I did because I believed her. Only after I saw the blood did I know she had lied to me.”

“She lied to you?”

“Yes.”

“The parole board isn’t going to let you go, and they shouldn’t,” Dr. Petrakis said. “You’re likely going to be transferred to maximum security now that you’re 18 years old. Truthfully, if they ask for my assessment of your condition, I’m going to say that a maximum security facility is exactly where you belong. It’s my time to leave now.”

“Eventually Norman was released, doctor! He was released and he was in the other movies! That’s what really happened! Doctor! He was released!”

“Goodbye, Anthony.”

Cellar Dweller
02-10-2009, 05:38 PM
I rather liked it. But you do know that this story placates to the censors that want the general public to believe that watching horror flicks will lead you to a life of murder. But still nice. Didn't see the ending coming.

H78
02-10-2009, 06:35 PM
placates to the censors that want the general public to believe that watching horror flicks will lead you to a life of murder

That's exactly why I wrote this.

And that's why it belongs in Fan Fiction :thumbup:

Wax Zombie
02-10-2009, 06:52 PM
excellent

Titanosaurus
02-11-2009, 10:30 AM
Hmmm...very clever.

Toby
02-11-2009, 11:24 PM
I liked it, that was pretty cool! Going insane from watching a horror movie...great effort on your writing, it's quite realistic.

H78
02-12-2009, 11:08 AM
Merci, kind gentlemen.

IKickAssForTheLord
02-12-2009, 12:42 PM
Good one H78!!

H78
02-12-2009, 01:35 PM
:greetings:

Matty
02-17-2009, 02:05 PM
Not bad at all!

Godfatha
02-18-2009, 10:36 PM
Could I suggest leaving the title at just 'Anthony', as it's obviously a nod to Perkins and Janet Leigh. A little more ambiguity in that given how you ended the story.

The story is pretty good overall, even if I'm not exactly able to gleam your point from it in truth.

H78
02-19-2009, 09:39 AM
Could I suggest leaving the title at just 'Anthony', as it's obviously a nod to Perkins and Janet Leigh. A little more ambiguity in that given how you ended the story.

The story is pretty good overall, even if I'm not exactly able to gleam your point from it in truth.

Meh, the title was created in about .02 seconds. I created the story, didn't know what I wanted the character to be named until it was completed (used "XXXXX" for the name when I first finished writing it), and happened to be thinking about Benjamin Button...voila, your title!

For the most part, I like to keep the message(s) in my writings ambiguous. I certainly feel like there's an obvious theme (horror creates monsters, which folks caught onto), but that's not the point or message I want people to take away. In fact, the whole point of the ending, with his psychiatrist, is to question that. I'm hoping people can see the real point being made beyond the "theme" of the story. So far, only one person has.

To summarize, only fiction lends itself to the thought that horror can push a person to do terrible things. It doesn't happen in reality. In reality, monsters are born without persuasion; they're just born. Only a crazy, fictitious character (Anthony) can be influenced to kill from watching horror films. He indicates - in his "reality" - that horror films pushed him to kill his mother. It is at that point for the reader that I'm hoping they can see the underlining message.

It's no fun if I just blanket my point/idea in an obvious way. :greetings:

Godfatha
02-19-2009, 10:25 PM
Meh, the title was created in about .02 seconds. I created the story, didn't know what I wanted the character to be named until it was completed (used "XXXXX" for the name when I first finished writing it), and happened to be thinking about Benjamin Button...voila, your title!

For the most part, I like to keep the message(s) in my writings ambiguous. I certainly feel like there's an obvious theme (horror creates monsters, which folks caught onto), but that's not the point or message I want people to take away. In fact, the whole point of the ending, with his psychiatrist, is to question that. I'm hoping people can see the real point being made beyond the "theme" of the story. So far, only one person has.

To summarize, only fiction lends itself to the thought that horror can push a person to do terrible things. It doesn't happen in reality. In reality, monsters are born without persuasion; they're just born. Only a crazy, fictitious character (Anthony) can be influenced to kill from watching horror films. He indicates - in his "reality" - that horror films pushed him to kill his mother. It is at that point for the reader that I'm hoping they can see the underlining message.

It's no fun if I just blanket my point/idea in an obvious way. :greetings:

Then I did get part of your point, that works of fiction/entertainment can't create psychotics merely reveal them. I think we all got that part. However, the 'only happens in fiction' aspect is badly conveyed, because no one but you mentioned it.

H78
02-19-2009, 11:06 PM
I think we all got that part. However, the 'only happens in fiction' aspect is badly conveyed, because no one but you mentioned it.

:dislike:

It was in the chatterbox hombre.

ScreamQueen83
05-04-2009, 06:02 PM
I really liked this. Keep up the good work!

Damian
06-09-2009, 05:35 AM
More excellent work, H78.

An interesting subject, for sure!

SkullBat308
07-23-2009, 05:15 AM
Good stuff!:downlow: