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HEKTIK15
05-28-2009, 10:38 PM
Not a story , but could'nt figure out where to post a poem. I wrote this at a down point in my life .



Sometimes I sit and wonder

Wonder where I went wrong

Theres nothing more to live for

Nothing keeps me strong



Sometimes I'd like to end it

Take everything away

Take myself out of this life

Make this my final day



Sometimes I hope I understand

Why life is never fair

Why even try to live it out

Why start trying to care



Somtimes I'd like to fall asleep

Never to awake

Have you ever thought to take your life

Just because its there to take



Sometimes I sit and ask myself

Why , Why all the pain

Theres nothing more to lose in life

And nothing more to gain



Sometimes I hope I realize

Our only chance is never

Once we're gone we cant come back

And we'll be gone forever



Sometimes I wish that it was over

Life was never mine

And do I ever think of dying

Don't we all sometimes...............

woodenheart
05-29-2009, 04:14 AM
Wow, Fantastic. I dabble in the writings of poetry..this is greatness. Thanks for sharing.

Runic
02-03-2010, 11:28 PM
"Have you ever thought to take your life

Just because its there to take"

Gonna think about that one for a while. I have a tough time understanding the down point of view and those lines are kinda thought provoking to me. Good poem Hektik, keep it up :coolbeer:

HEKTIK15
02-03-2010, 11:34 PM
"Have you ever thought to take your life

Just because its there to take"

Gonna think about that one for a while. I have a tough time understanding the down point of view and those lines are kinda thought provoking to me. Good poem Hektik, keep it up :coolbeer:

Thanx again :budsdrink:

Halcon Loco
02-03-2010, 11:38 PM
Nice job, keep it up.

HEKTIK15
02-03-2010, 11:45 PM
Nice job, keep it up.

Thanx :budsdrink:

Halcon Loco
02-04-2010, 12:27 AM
No probs

Broken Skull
02-04-2010, 12:47 AM
Sometimes I sit and wonder

Wonder where I went wrong

Theres nothing more to live for

Nothing keeps me strong...

Kinda felt that way for a bit when the wifey left......good job on the poem.

deadcellsociety
02-04-2010, 07:06 AM
Awesome man. Thought provoking stuff...