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HEKTIK15
09-05-2009, 09:39 PM
Red is the color

when you prick my skin



Red is the color

when the needle is in



Red is the stain

When it touches the ground



Red is my heart

Nowhere to be found



Red is the vision

As you slowly die



Red is the tear

As I say goodbye



Red is the color

Thats blocking my view



Red is the way

That I feel bout you



Red

BigFatOgre
09-06-2009, 12:19 AM
:thumbup3:

K.I.N.G
09-06-2009, 03:40 AM
Blood Red :rockin:

HEKTIK15
09-06-2009, 02:52 PM
Wish I could have wrote it in red , thanx for the comments

Runic
02-03-2010, 08:21 PM
Awesome poem, I adore rhymes

HEKTIK15
02-03-2010, 08:53 PM
Awesome poem, I adore rhymes

Thanx :budsdrink: just edited it in red

Halcon Loco
02-03-2010, 10:03 PM
Nice poem.

HEKTIK15
02-03-2010, 10:17 PM
Nice poem.

Thanx :budsdrink:

woodenheart
02-03-2010, 10:41 PM
you're a poet!! Keep writing.

HEKTIK15
02-03-2010, 10:50 PM
you're a poet!! Keep writing.

Thanx Miss Dub :budsdrink:

Mudvayne_Eternal
03-02-2010, 05:00 PM
Woot! This touched the coldness of my heart...Great Job!!

koolmike
03-02-2010, 05:13 PM
Nicely done.