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    "Crotch Rot" Watch my new short!

    Sorry that this is a repost, but I think my first one was in the wrong area.

    Hey guys, check out my new short! It's contagious! Would love to hear your thoughts!

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    I think every guy in on this forum wants to hurt you for giving them something new to be afraid of.

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    As far as Youtube horror shorts, that was absolutely among the better.

    The advice following is honestly meant out of appreciation - not "you suck." More like "this is how I think it could go from really cool to f'n awesome."

    "Later that day" seems like it could have been handled with a visual aid - a long fade followed by the same dialog, or maybe something like a clock shot. The guy is already dry, dressed, and obviously much worse off than in the last scene.

    I also thought it was odd that he was bleeding that heavily but his clothes only got a little wet from the sink.

    Again, I thought it was great. The payoff was awesome. Just a couple of thoughts.

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    I'm sorry but a melting cock shot may have made it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by bedlam23 View Post
    I'm sorry but a melting cock shot may have made it.
    I honestly thought that was very well executed with the bloody messes first falling then viewed in the toilet. (I'm also surprised YouTube let them get away with that.)

    Hey, on that note, you may be able to convert to .flv and host the movies on your own site, if YouTube ever gets uptight about the content.

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    Pretty sweet, man.
    Good job putting it together:appl1:

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    cool video

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    Not bad at all man, shows some promise. Shots are competent and you found a way to make every guy petrified of banging out some floozie haha. I also agree with Luris about the "later that day..." thing.

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